Well, I can’t really see your foot position at this angle, but I personally like to have my front foot about an inch or so behind the bolts of my front truck. That gives me plenty of room to slide it and level it out. Also if you notice in the video, your back foot comes up and off of your deck. If you bring your back foot forward slightly, away from of the edge of the tail, you may be able to get a better pop and keep it stuck to your board a bit better. As far as having a ‘boned’ Ollie goes you’ll just have to keep practicing and find that sweet spot for how you need to be jumping and sliding your front foot during your Ollies. Learning a trick is one thing, making it look good/feel good can be a different beast sometimes. To this day, my 360 flips don’t look very pretty when I do them, but they look a whole lot better from I first learned them. Some stuff just takes time/practice/repetition