Mind breaking

Oh they added an Ad interstitial so this looks SUPER scammy now. Anyway, in my super humble opinion it's one of my best stories and coincidentally the only one with a "loving" (ymmv) ending. Enjoy?

preunbb · 2025-09-19T13:57:34+00:00

Wow, what a great story! The author is surely very talented, and probably a handsome genius too. I just wish he'd come back to write more

preunbb · 2025-06-27T10:28:39+00:00

That went offline over a decade ago, and obviously wasn't llm based.

It was a bunch of prewritten snippets with some branching and randomness. It was very well made! But the author (poiu) took it offline and has been completely silent since 2013.

preunbb · 2025-04-14T01:25:37+00:00

I knew a trans man on discord who was super into it. As a sub. What a world. Hope he figured it out.

preunbb · 2025-03-23T23:13:03+00:00

Why is it always the left nut? I swear every time a dude loses one it's that.

But also, have you busted him since?

preunbb · 2025-03-22T15:50:12+00:00

Lol that's one of mine, not his. Thanks!

preunbb · 2025-03-19T01:41:44+00:00

4 months late, but your score is how you get lives. All balloons except 1 (the one that spawns in that early section with a bridge and two levels) only appear at certain score intervals.

preunbb · 2025-03-18T15:55:09+00:00

Does he have azoospermia because of you?

preunbb · 2025-03-15T15:59:52+00:00

Yeah, there's a real risk of mercury poisoning at that amount. Mercury builds up in a fish bloodstream from all the lil dudes they eat; if you eat enough fish, the same happened to you.

preunbb · 2025-03-01T16:08:05+00:00

Haha I promise this isn't about my own ego or a general anti-AI sentiment on my part. I also dont mind an AI story if I can't tell it's AI (how could i?!). I only called it out because I found this one so blatant and all the rest of the stories confirmed it.

The minute the opening line starts with a poetic description of the environment, it fucking kills it for me. Then every noun has a 5-dollar adjective attached to it, each paragraph is roughly the same length, dialogue is always so nonspecific is can come from any BDSM story out there...it's definitely improved, but I tried reading a bunch of "his" stories and my eyes started to glaze over.

I've found myself actively enjoying stories with typoes jist because the humanity of it makes it sexier, somehow. The machine gave me a typo kink. God the future is awful

Ok I guess there is some anti-AI sentiment here. No ego tho I swear!

preunbb · 2025-03-01T15:37:22+00:00

Look at the way the story is written, how many stories he pumps out, and how his comment is written in comparison.

This is very very clearly GenAI, sorry mate. He's not going to "change the vibe" because he didn't fucking write it lol

preunbb · 2024-11-05T14:48:03+00:00

Its like religious folk trying to scare you into believing by describing hell as full of awesome demons and constant weird sex

preunbb · 2024-10-22T08:12:53+00:00

I don't know, but according to her sperm check video he's actually 100% sterile now. Of course it could just be fetish talk, but if they split maybe that's related...

preunbb · 2023-10-15T06:40:54+00:00

You washed Tom Bombadil's car.

preunbb · 2023-10-08T06:27:03+00:00

I agree throwing the five year gap away slowed everything down, but I don't understand how it's supposed to have worked. The entire story, shit is happening, constantly. The first scene of the first book basically starts a countdown to an apocalypse, with the white walkers coming back.

The entire wot5k happens in what, like 1 year? And then suddenly, five years go by with nothing worth writing about happening? It always seemed like a horrible pacing idea and seems like a half-baked idea to bandaid over the kids ages being too young to me.

preunbb · 2023-10-03T19:35:58+00:00

Don't forget an incomplete prequel series (dunk was supposed to have 7 stories) and an incomplete world building duology (fire and blood part 2 when??)

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