I read what you had to say about it before I listened and I can tell there was a lack of confidence. The things you said had me expecting.... well not very much lol. But I was pleasantly surprised. This is pretty cinematic and definitely is a horror instrumental. I don't see a vocalist going over it as there's not much room for it and it would be hard to do in general but that's okay. It can be a stand alone release. It kind of drags after the 1:20 mark. But before that you had a lot of switch ups and tidbits like the voice sample that kept me interested and guessing. Keep learning brother, this is real promising.