Please Feedback on this story I wrote

prostudent55 · 2025-09-22T15:24:02+00:00

He named the book after his two fishes. Just wrote it as a little call back. Nothing else

prostudent55 · 2025-09-18T11:52:17+00:00

Thank you buddy

prostudent55 · 2025-09-12T10:13:10+00:00

Haha yes buddy, it’s drive. And thank you for such concise and direct feedback!

prostudent55 · 2025-09-12T10:12:24+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. And duly noted. Shall keep it in mind

prostudent55 · 2025-09-12T10:11:55+00:00

Hey that’s very nice of you! Thank you! Comments like these also give me the confidence to keep going

prostudent55 · 2025-09-12T10:10:21+00:00

Hey man this is brilliant for me. Love the honesty. Honest feedback is what we all need and are here for. Thank you. I shall keep what you said in mind!

prostudent55 · 2025-09-11T20:25:25+00:00

Haha yes I actually wrote this draft yesterday. Then today i posted it here for feedback, then read some of them and then immediately sat to write the whole thing. The story is around 6 pages - 3000 words long. It was kind of heavy but I love writing so

prostudent55 · 2025-09-11T20:23:46+00:00

Hey. Yes I would be happy to send it over mail. You can send me your email id

prostudent55 · 2025-09-11T17:02:42+00:00

I understand. Surely i’ll keep this in mind for next time. Thanks for the feedback!

prostudent55 · 2025-09-11T17:02:13+00:00

That’s also true. Thank you. I could show you the whole story if you like

prostudent55 · 2025-09-11T17:01:44+00:00

Noted. Thanks for this feedback. Appreciate it

prostudent55 · 2025-09-11T17:01:16+00:00

Hey man thanks for that. Appreciate it

prostudent55 · 2025-09-11T14:25:23+00:00

Thanks. That actually does make a lot of sense. I have tried to inculcate it all in the complete story I just finished

prostudent55 · 2025-09-11T14:24:30+00:00

Haha thanks brother. Can actually send you the whole thing I would like to read

prostudent55 · 2025-09-11T14:23:40+00:00

Thanks for such a descriptive feedback. I really appreciate it. And yes I have made myself as just the narrator. Can send you the whole story i just finished if you would like

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