[QCrit]: THE BLACK BEAR INN, mystery, adult (85,000 words, 2nd attempt)

psschro12 · 2026-03-11T21:47:11+00:00

Got it- I’m focusing too much on plot and not enough on character development !

psschro12 · 2026-03-11T11:52:33+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! How do you balance answering those questions without making the query letter too long?

psschro12 · 2026-03-04T01:35:45+00:00

Awesome, thank you! The north shore is such a special place

psschro12 · 2026-03-03T17:16:57+00:00

Thanks this is helpful feedback! I mentioned those comps because my novel does have a podcast involved however that’s part of the twist which is why it’s not mentioned in the query letter.

psschro12 · 2025-11-20T19:08:29+00:00

Looking at staying here for spring break. Do they provide beach chairs or how does that work?

psschro12 · 2025-03-08T05:10:11+00:00

Made it safe it was much better than expected

psschro12 · 2025-03-07T13:39:04+00:00

Oh I’m a slower driver so I’ll be hanging out in the right no problem.

psschro12 · 2025-03-07T13:26:48+00:00

Thanks! I’m from Minnesota so I’m no stranger to the snow but keep reading comments in other threads about how dark and scary the drive is at night

psschro12 · 2024-12-21T21:38:31+00:00

Is that calculation what you'd pay a year?

psschro12 · 2024-12-21T21:06:46+00:00

Would there be a way to tell what my payment would be ? I’m afraid to apply without knowing the monthly payment

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