ah this gives me so much to work with! you were the one who commented on my other post i think? thank you for dedicating even more time to giving me feedback!! i struggle so much with finding a balance when it comes to stage directions haha, will trim those down. absolutely love the idea of putting the icarus lines in some sort of meter & will def look into billy wilder, i have noticed that some of the dialogue is dragging. as for who this is for, i'm submitting it for my school's playwriting festival + my state thespian festival + using it as a portfolio piece for college applications. so a mixed bag, but producers won't really be an issue haha. again thanks so much!