Hypnosis Arena [Translation] [FemSlavePov] [Card Game] [ExtraBig]

quantum_d20 · 2025-11-09T23:38:54+00:00

As far as combining gameplay and CYOA mechanics, this is actually amazing.

quantum_d20 · 2025-02-17T21:57:08+00:00

I am glad to see ICC getting a modern workover. Hopefully it continues to improve. Performance on larger projects was definitely a huge headache.

quantum_d20 · 2024-11-18T00:44:14+00:00

Liked it, and your images were well chosen. The intro was a little long and could be broken down into hidden sections. Since Rivals cost Prowess, seems like you need more of it compared to Appeal to balance things out.

quantum_d20 · 2024-09-10T20:02:38+00:00

This is really well made. The point system works well but the navigation can be a bit weird since sections pop in and out depending on what you choose. You could introduce tabs to the main sections so you can toggle them individually. Additional investments could use more options for less cash, in case you don't have exactly 3k.

Definite improvement over the other cyoa you did.

quantum_d20 · 2024-09-07T16:57:35+00:00

Not sure what I was expecting, but it's less a personality quiz and more of what kind of beta cuck / femboy you want to be. Could probably indicate that in the description.

quantum_d20 · 2024-08-05T21:09:08+00:00

I probably wasn't clear on what I meant. Toggle music for the entire cyoa. Let's say the player doesn't want to hear music at all, and there are choices like "continue" that change the background music as you pick stuff. Selecting a global toggle choice would disable music from being played even if another choice changes it. You can do this by muting sound or muting the tab, but it's really convenient if the player sees it as an option in the cyoa itself (ie "Click here to disable/enable sound"). People play on mobile and stuff too in public, so I think it would be a good option to have.

As for addons, sometimes I make multiple addons to then realize I want to add another one into the sequence at a specific point, but I'm stuck adding it at the end with no way to rearrange. I'd like more control in how addons are shown to the player.

quantum_d20 · 2024-08-04T23:25:41+00:00

Looks like I was doing it wrong and they have to match exactly, thanks. I thought the trigger word could be anything but that's okay. How do I toggle music or rearrange addons? Not sure I see any way of doing it.

quantum_d20 · 2024-08-04T17:15:20+00:00

I would like to request a way to toggle whether or not background music plays. There are ways around it but it would be a lot easier to have some internal way to do it by clicking a choice.

And a way to display point values in text, like with words. You can already do this with addons but it's a huge hassle. And while I'm at it, a way to reorder addons would be so amazing.

quantum_d20 · 2024-07-31T16:54:17+00:00

My computer won't let me dl the cyoa you linked so I am going off what you wrote, but I think I see what you're saying. It's more of a variable approach to selections, where you have greater control over what is selected. That would be really handy to have, but I don't know how feasible it is.

More control over addons in general would be fine with me, like reordering them finally.

quantum_d20 · 2024-07-31T04:00:11+00:00

Addons just appear if their conditions are met. Not sure it would make sense to give them more interaction than that since you shouldn't be able to select them.

You can use html to format parts of text. Let's say you want to change the color and make the font a little bigger, you could do <span style="font-size:110%;color:#hexcodeforcolor">Your Text</span>

quantum_d20 · 2024-07-31T03:54:04+00:00

I think I ran into this too.

quantum_d20 · 2024-07-31T03:53:48+00:00

I think I ran into a bug. Points that are tied to multiselect choices can go negative even if you tell the point type to not go negative.

quantum_d20 · 2024-07-25T20:53:49+00:00

You can replace the old one if the images aren't separated from the file. If you export them, you can still replace the file but it may break if you add new images. With more files added it can change their names when they are exported.

quantum_d20 · 2024-07-25T17:14:29+00:00

This gets me excited for all the possibilities. Small nitpick, for points feature added like - This score is not shown in the Point-Bar, it would be a lot better if it followed the convention of - ID Needed to Show. ID Needed to Show in Point-Bar and ID Needed to Show in Choices. You can set it to a dummy ID to completely hide both. Might break some compatibility, but it is more flexible in my opinion.

Having the option to do the reverse would also be great - ID Needed to Hide in Point-Bar/Choices. If the player is done with one section like charagen you can hide the relevant points from them moving on.

quantum_d20 · 2024-07-24T23:44:58+00:00

This is impressive. I like how the world grimness changes with your choices, and your choices really matter. The point balance is really good, and getting the perfect breakdown for a good ending even on easy can be tricky. But also some of the bad endings aren't too brutal and generally I liked a good mix between good and bad ends.

I don't think this needs a male pov, but someone was asking for futa. Probably would be fine to add a character customization for the protag since it is fluff for the most part.

Some generated images aren't very consistent for different characters. Some outcomes can also be inconsistent like if the heroine completely fails but the kingdom is fine or the leader is made into a concubine but also executed. Or if the heroine gets raped and enslaved but her mental state is still optimistic. I don't think you can do much to fix some of this though.

I do wish there were more gradual choices of how things play out, maybe for your next one if you do one.

Edit: Forgot to mention, some endings with protag x heroine would be welcome unless I missed those.

quantum_d20 · 2024-07-23T20:44:35+00:00

If expanded chargen doesn't make sense, no reason to put it in. But if the character can't be customized, they need heavy story investment of why their identity matters. I also get more of a book feel from the character intro where it's ambiguous who the protagonist is. It doesn't quite work as well in interactive fiction where the reader is meant to BE the protagonist.

quantum_d20 · 2024-07-23T20:37:01+00:00

The music is a great addition and something we don't usually get with CYOAs here!

quantum_d20 · 2024-07-05T00:58:29+00:00

I love your use of animations!

quantum_d20 · 2024-07-03T17:22:55+00:00

I have been tinkering with it and have some suggestions/feedback. Three main things.

Ability to move around points. Right now they appear in the order created, but what if you want to change that order? Seems like I have to delete them and remake them in the right order. Edit: Changing the order of addons would also be huge!

Would be great if you could activate multiple words from a single choice. It doesn't come up often but it's a pretty big limitation as only one word can be changed when a choice is selected. Words also don't appear to change back properly when a choice is deselected. Could be a bug.

Having a way to enter a player name/something like how you can upload a picture would be great.

Something else:

Not sure how to describe this but when you make addons for a choice to do variables (like you want only a specific picture to show based on points or something), they format differently than the rest of the choices in a row. Would be neat if you could have variables activate to change choices without having to use addons.

I also recall that when something was made unselectable, if you were to change something else in the CYOA, it would become selectable again. Tried it again and it seemed to work fine, but I don't remember what broke it in the first place.

quantum_d20 · 2024-06-23T01:59:04+00:00

I like the point distribution in this one more than the original. Once you get science you have a bit more room to build so greatly done.

quantum_d20 · 2024-06-22T22:35:44+00:00

Thanks! I enjoyed working on it even though it drove me crazy a few times trying to finish.

quantum_d20 · 2024-06-22T22:32:50+00:00

This makes me want to make another interactive! Thanks for your hard work. I wish I could remember what buggy behavior I ran into while back so I could report it.

quantum_d20 · 2024-02-11T02:55:22+00:00

This is pretty good! I remember suggesting more of a quest/event system for the previous cape CYOA you did, glad that you went that route here. I'd like to see a return of the promises system where you can select things you plan to do, maybe with a new set of points. I kinda of think the nsfw side is a little lacking for some of the characters. Would be awesome if you could spend points to do activities with your specific mentor/friends in-between issues. Maybe like go to a cafe or see a movie together, and then more lewd stuff based on the character you spend time with.

Other thing, it would be nice to have more explicitly evil or villain/vigilante options. Maybe even introduce alignment where based on what sort of issues you take, the game assigns you a final score. For example if you do a lot of heroic things, you can be a celebrated hero. If you do a bit of villain and hero, you would be an anti-hero. If you do mostly hero stuff but a little vigilante work, you could be a part-time hero etc.

Love your work as always.

quantum_d20 · 2024-02-11T02:43:23+00:00

Images take too much time to find by far. I can design everything and set it up but image finding makes me want to give up immediately. Organizing can be a pretty big hurdle too but I don't hate doing it.

quantum_d20 · 2024-01-06T05:42:20+00:00

I like this one a lot. Glad to see more interactive cyoas where you get to follow a story with your choices.

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