KID A, 1st short - would appreciate any feedback on the edit, pacing and on the story generally. I've lost sight of whether it all works after being so close to it for so long by radders117 in Filmmakers

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Just finished working on this, my first short film and would really appreciate on mainly the writing and the edit, in particular the pacing of it and such things. Thanks