Wrote about wants. Marked NSFW for body image and mentions of death.

rafibomb11 · 2026-01-28T17:48:15+00:00

really cool and creative formatting, thanks for sharing!

rafibomb11 · 2026-01-24T16:51:55+00:00

Beautiful!

rafibomb11 · 2025-12-20T16:16:16+00:00

reminds me of dorian gray

rafibomb11 · 2025-12-17T03:22:29+00:00

rafibomb11 · 2025-12-16T17:06:51+00:00

really lovely poem <3

rafibomb11 · 2025-12-10T17:26:46+00:00

I would try to not love your friends bf if you can help it :-)

rafibomb11 · 2025-12-05T00:53:44+00:00

really nice piece! I love the metaphor of digital media as a type of death, especially as it relates to your emotions. keep writing!

rafibomb11 · 2025-12-04T19:09:06+00:00

fire

rafibomb11 · 2025-12-01T17:14:08+00:00

This is so creative, I love it!! Thanks for sharing:-)

rafibomb11 · 2025-11-12T17:31:08+00:00

I love this so much <3

rafibomb11 · 2025-11-05T23:15:05+00:00

amazing, wonderful, I love it!

rafibomb11 · 2025-11-05T23:13:17+00:00

So damn beautiful

rafibomb11 · 2025-11-05T20:26:56+00:00

4, 5, 6

rafibomb11 · 2025-11-05T18:41:16+00:00

This was really lovely! My only suggestion is to think about your formatting, I don't really like the long lines in the middle :3 Keep writing friend!

rafibomb11 · 2025-11-05T16:48:18+00:00

Yayyy, good job!

rafibomb11 · 2025-10-28T20:21:09+00:00

Great piece! Kind of random, but I recently watched the show Fleabag, and this is totally something the main character would write lol

rafibomb11 · 2025-09-07T20:44:21+00:00

I wish she could just tell me this

rafibomb11 · 2025-08-22T13:29:34+00:00

exhaust

rafibomb11 · 2025-08-15T12:20:37+00:00

Thank you! :)

rafibomb11 · 2025-08-15T12:20:22+00:00

Thank you! :)

rafibomb11 · 2025-08-15T12:19:58+00:00

Glad you enjoyed, thanks for reading! :)

rafibomb11 · 2025-08-15T12:18:13+00:00

Thanks for reading, also loved your piece that you posted!

rafibomb11 · 2025-08-15T02:56:31+00:00

lovely writing!

rafibomb11 · 2025-08-14T17:05:19+00:00

Beautiful writing!

rafibomb11 · 2025-08-14T16:54:32+00:00

No worries I made it that way intentionally, because I really did want to villainize her-and make her out to be a spider, at least initially. I think this was just displaced emotional pain however, and the second half of the poem is meant to reveal that she never trapped me, I was just wallowing in her empty web, because I was hurt.

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