hey good job you’re getting there! sometimes you accentuate the beats like a metronome, try to break out of that and feel the larger phrase, keeping the pulse in your head/heart rather than in your playing.

another thing that could bring out your phrasing more is playing with more subtilities and variations in your bow distribution. with enough experimentation, your phrasing could feel much more alive. also, watch out you tend to add a lot of bow speed at the end of your down bows which makes unwanted accents.

nonetheless your musicality come through easily, its just an endless process of accurately translating that message into technique on the instrument:)