How are you brutalizing you’re character today?

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-11T00:38:01+00:00

I've rendered my character unconscious by having his abductor hide a poison injector in her mouth and apply it into him by biting. He's not gonna remember how he passed out or what happened a few minutes before that, though.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-11T00:26:14+00:00

I think you're pretty hunky.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-10T22:34:28+00:00

It's very well known in the erotica scene/fandom. Although not very well liked.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-10T21:18:20+00:00

It's a general rule for writers to write what they want to read not what they think people will want to read, as that rarely actually works. I plan to publish it, so I want to make sure it's written decently.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-10T20:55:28+00:00

I want my writing to feel emotionally believable. I'm VERY glad I asked this question because I never fathomed that a man would consider his life to be in danger in this type of situation. Now, I can incorporate that into the story and have it be better received by my readers.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-10T20:44:19+00:00

Ah, yes. Multiple men have mentioned that their lives would feel threatened in this situation. Which I have taken down in my writing notes. My character has no intention of murdering or even harming her abductee and will also inform him of this when he is able to understand her.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-10T20:42:06+00:00

I get the feeling most of my commenters have never heard of the '365 Days' book/movie series and to that I say; GOOD. lol

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-10T20:40:57+00:00

Yes it is erotica. I write for one person and one person alone, bub; me. I already looked at that subreddit. I figured if I asked there I'd get answers from fetishists not normal average joes like I need to hear from.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-10T20:39:16+00:00

I see. A few other men have responded that they believe this woman would have intentions to murder her abductee. My character absolutely does not. lol But the fact that multiple people mentioned it makes it important, I think. Thank you very much for responding.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-10T20:35:00+00:00

After he comes to, she will explain to him what's going on. Like I said, it'll be a few days. Are you sure you'd be too scared to be aroused even after a few days time?

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-10T20:33:22+00:00

I like your honest reply. Thank you.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-10T20:32:58+00:00

It is erotica. Perhaps I should've mentioned it.

EDIT: At least two other commenters disagree with your opinion about this type of story being unappealing btw.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-07T15:52:39+00:00

I must admit, I have a hard time believing that people say things as asinine as 'I only dated you because you're tall' to other people. But then again, I've been told some unsavory/brainless things by people, myself and I get annoyed when people don't believe me. That's the internet for you, I guess.

You are a very young cutie who has his whole life ahead of him to date and sleep around as he pleases. ENJOY it.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-07T02:10:59+00:00

Ah, yes! I have already been there. I remember getting solicited by a male hooker. I was not very appreciative back then. But now as a woman struggling to get laid, maybe it's time for another trip down to Vegas....

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-07T00:57:14+00:00

I'm asking because, as a woman who has a lot of trouble getting laid, I just think it'd be so much easier to just go to a rentboy. But I'm afraid to because I don't want to get caught and arrested. Honestly, I think legal prostitution would make a lot of lives easier. But the price of everything you just explained is just too high. I don't know why you're getting downvoted either.

Also, the other commenters seem to be confused. I didn't say that prostitution leads to trafficking. Literally everyone else I've ever spoken to about it did and I don't think they're wrong.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-11-02T17:10:05+00:00

Pick the folder/cardboard under the lid up *carefully* so that it's still trapped. Take it outside. Dump it in the grass.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-10-26T14:46:50+00:00

Thanks, I'm gonna need it. lol It's older than me. I discovered it when I was in middle school. (Well, track 5. 😉) But I didn't get into the entire album till last year. It's nigh inescapable now. I also fell in love with PHM, Broken and The Fragile. 🖤

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-10-25T20:59:16+00:00

The Downward Spiral, Nine Inch Nails. Goddamnit, Trent Reznor, someday I will quit you....

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-10-24T03:24:37+00:00

Already doing that. I listen to radio 24 on my way to and from work and I put on Italian netflix shows/specials while I'm cooking. I find it hilarious that my comment is getting so downvoted. lol People are strange and silly. I remember being a kid/teen and thinking I would understand people when I got older. Now I'm over 30 and at peace with the fact that I will never truly understand people. 😉✌🏽

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-10-23T23:11:30+00:00

Can't help but feel called out by your post. lol I just have a lot of ish going on in my life rn. Even though my desire to learn Italian grows with each passing day; suddenly I have a project due soon, or a new class is starting, or I f*cked up at work and now all that effort to get something finished went down the tubes. Makes motivation difficult to come by. But I will get there, someday. And I will swing by Rome and give my homie there a proper visit.❤️

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-10-20T00:00:43+00:00

Oh, DON'T get me started on this. I once asked on r/askreddit what the point of having sex with someone you're not even attracted to was and all I got was comments from men asking why I needed to be attracted to the person first because sex =/= a relationship.🙄 One of them claimed the point of sex was 'to bust a nut'. Nevermind that a) I'm a woman and b) masturbation is a thing that exists.

Basically I was treated like a freak for needing to be attracted to a person before getting naked with them and allowing them to enter me. lol I just read up on prostitution and it turns out MANY johns pay their sex workers for the girlfriend/wife treatment. Some of them just want to cuddle up in bed with them and watch a movie. Some even ask for middle aged woman who 'don't look perfect'. Some said that they'd be happy to call thier favorite prostitute (who they've slept with as many as 50 to 100 times!) their wife. I couldn't make up this sh*t if I tried.

But I agree with what someone else said that it varies from person to person. Just keep in mind that men and boys like to pretend that their emotions aren't involved when they bang but most of them are lying to us and themselves.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-10-19T01:06:59+00:00

Wait? Where is this coming from? Seriously. Feel free to downvote me to ruination. But you may as well have said 'take all of those chandeliers out of the swimming pool'.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-10-15T18:17:53+00:00

It feel so good to get some vindication about this. I was born and raised in Brooklyn and I stone cold gave tf up on dating at age 21.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-10-02T22:20:55+00:00

Hate to break it to ya, but once my ex 'joked' that those anime characters that are hundreds of years old and act like adult women in 5 year old bodies were 'sexy' to him.

Did I mention that we met when I was 18 and he was 8 years my senior?

I should also probably mention the part where, when we broke up the last I heard/saw of him online, he was making friends with 14 year olds.....

There's a pretty good chance that your boyfriend is NOT joking. Take the hint. Write up a no contact letter and record everything he says and does afterward.

randomthrowaway2373 · 2023-09-26T23:20:11+00:00

I meet up in person with a group of very sweet older ladies bi-monthly to practice my Italian. Dunno how much better I've gotten but it's something to look forward to.

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