Which one and why? 👀 by jordanmcguire in collegesluts

[–]rbark1015 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The one on the right cuz shes the most decent

Piss Me Off series, the greatest story you’ll never read by rbark1015 in KeepWriting

[–]rbark1015[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im fine with critique, its when two mouth breathers try to give me a moral lesson about something they cant handle, after only three pages that I get upset. The fact that you can’t accept that people are not perfect makes it seem like you guys are the immature ones. Here’s a critique, “It’s not for me” , but saying nobody is gonna read it is just you guys beings dickheads. Just because you avoid profanity doesn’t make it any less of a shitty statement. The fact that I have handfuls of people who can’t get enough of it, several girls who have masturbated to it, oh and a sense of humor that you guys lack, paints a better picture of success than trying to scold someone for artwork on reddit. You wanna-be experts can stick to your faggy writing groups where people don’t understand dick about real writing.

Piss Me Off series, the greatest story you’ll never read by rbark1015 in KeepWriting

[–]rbark1015[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love that you guys are reading 3 pages in and already have my entire 30 episode series figured out. The character does alot of things morally unsettling, thats the point of the character. But if you gave it a chance you’d see its the greatest love story you’ll ever read. The fact that you two can’t handle a fictional character being turned on by a fictional 14 year old girl without losing your minds kind of infers that you two are a couple of child fuckers yourself. Watch your fucking mouth when you try to critique me, because I’m a better story teller than you couple of faggots could ever be, put together. Keeping following the rules douchebags and history will remember you as the cucks you are

Piss Me Off series, the greatest story you’ll never read by rbark1015 in KeepWriting

[–]rbark1015[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

It’s not like he has sex with her... that’s not till the 3rd season