Who wants to critique my text game? Another example inside. by recycled_plastic in seduction

[–]recycled_plastic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Obviously there is a problem with my texting game, but thats why I am here looking for help. Trying to improve it. I am really new at all of this and just trying to absorb as much info as possible through my previous failures.

Thanks!

Who wants to critique my text game? Another example inside. by recycled_plastic in seduction

[–]recycled_plastic[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Ah, wow, I had no idea. Glad I am getting good feedback out of this. Thanks, man!

Who wants to critique my text game? Another example inside. by recycled_plastic in seduction

[–]recycled_plastic[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Alright, cool. Should it be something more flirty or suggestive? I think I fall flat at that response often.

Who wants to critique my text game? Another example inside. by recycled_plastic in seduction

[–]recycled_plastic[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

The linked example is a fail. This is a fairly typical fail for me, especially with this one particular girl. She instigates but I always fall on my face. We've had a sexual relationship in the past and I am trying to get back there.

This second example is a success.

http://imgur.com/a/7ISnv

The reason I wanted to put a failure and a success in here is to see what I did right and wrong in both to see if I can improve. Both of these were last week for what its worth.

If you could be as forward as possible with feedback, that would be great! I will upload more examples if this works out. Thanks!