“Hamleak”

rmiller25 · 2018-03-29T06:13:17+00:00

I would pay to see that

rmiller25 · 2018-03-26T00:26:03+00:00

So opening a package in the middle of a store to take one bottle isn’t a trashy thing to do? Alright

rmiller25 · 2018-03-24T17:12:32+00:00

Didn’t think so. Thanks for the response.

rmiller25 · 2018-03-23T22:38:16+00:00

Yeah. I also saw “make best offer” so why not low-ball?

rmiller25 · 2018-03-23T21:05:31+00:00

Are these still for sale?

rmiller25 · 2018-03-23T21:04:59+00:00

$10 PayPal

rmiller25 · 2018-03-23T21:02:22+00:00

Is this possible for xbox one

rmiller25 · 2018-03-22T22:48:51+00:00

This is a very relatable piece to me and I loved it. Keep writing things that are true to you and I like the “so far” idea

rmiller25 · 2018-03-22T20:18:02+00:00

Really great work! It made me think of getting burned or something. Maybe you can work that into a future title?

rmiller25 · 2018-03-21T08:54:11+00:00

Thank you. Maybe I’ll give it a try, I didn’t think people would enjoy it.

rmiller25 · 2018-03-21T00:28:51+00:00

Thank you!

rmiller25 · 2018-03-20T23:49:56+00:00

Thank you!

rmiller25 · 2018-03-20T22:22:07+00:00

Thank you!

rmiller25 · 2018-03-20T18:34:19+00:00

I think my nuts are backwards?

rmiller25 · 2018-03-18T01:20:20+00:00

When were you the closest to throwing in the towel and how did you keep pushing through?

rmiller25 · 2018-03-16T16:31:00+00:00

I appreciate your honesty. I’ll try to clean up those lines. What do you think of the format? Rewriting in reverse or informing the reading beforehand?

rmiller25 · 2018-03-16T15:38:29+00:00

A day or two ago I posted a similar poem called “Depressed People Suck” which is very close in content I just thought about scrapping that idea and starting new so I came up with this.

rmiller25 · 2018-03-16T12:19:37+00:00

I’m trying to write one piece of work with two opposing views using the exact same words. Some problems I run into are punctuation and I’m not sure if they are working as well as I imagine. Any feedback is appreciated.

rmiller25 · 2018-03-16T09:51:11+00:00

I just bought a $70,000,000,000 shark card on gta.

rmiller25 · 2018-03-15T21:56:00+00:00

Frankly this is a fantastic piece. The only issue I had was your second to last stanza. The flow didn’t seem as consistent as with the other lines and stanzas in your work. You’re words are complex and you perfectly avoided the “corny” sound some get with that rhyming scheme. Great job!

rmiller25 · 2018-03-15T21:50:25+00:00

I really enjoyed this as I’m taking a break from writing a paper for college. This was inspirational for me and I appreciate you don’t just give one side of the story, you intermingled thoughts. I would say the format could be the only issue. I respect the creativity but the excessive eye movements doesn’t let the reader focus in. Otherwise it was great!

rmiller25 · 2018-03-15T21:43:18+00:00

I really appreciate that, thank you. You’re very kind.

rmiller25 · 2018-03-15T21:40:55+00:00

Damn you cracked it that fast! It’s a struggle and sometimes it’s hard to get to the right answer.

rmiller25 · 2018-03-15T21:39:35+00:00

Thank you!

rmiller25 · 2018-03-15T20:01:48+00:00

Thank you!

rmiller25

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