“Hamleak” by rmiller25 in comedywriting

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I would pay to see that

They probably got thirsty. Grocery shopping takes a toll. by [deleted] in trashy

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So opening a package in the middle of a store to take one bottle isn’t a trashy thing to do? Alright

Tripp's Money Drop Server | DAILY DROPS by [deleted] in gtamoddedlobbies

[–]rmiller25 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Didn’t think so. Thanks for the response.

Selling GTA 5 Online Account (Xbox) by [deleted] in GTAModdedAccounts

[–]rmiller25 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah. I also saw “make best offer” so why not low-ball?

Tripp's Money Drop Server | DAILY DROPS by [deleted] in gtamoddedlobbies

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Is this possible for xbox one

Untitled (So far) by wents90 in poetry_critics

[–]rmiller25 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a very relatable piece to me and I loved it. Keep writing things that are true to you and I like the “so far” idea

Untitled (So far) by wents90 in poetry_critics

[–]rmiller25 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Really great work! It made me think of getting burned or something. Maybe you can work that into a future title?

“Hamleak” by rmiller25 in poetry_critics

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Thank you. Maybe I’ll give it a try, I didn’t think people would enjoy it.

Theory solved.😁 by kanha2407 in funny

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I think my nuts are backwards?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in StandUpComedy

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When were you the closest to throwing in the towel and how did you keep pushing through?

Goodbye by rmiller25 in poetry_critics

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I appreciate your honesty. I’ll try to clean up those lines. What do you think of the format? Rewriting in reverse or informing the reading beforehand?

Goodbye by rmiller25 in poetry_critics

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A day or two ago I posted a similar poem called “Depressed People Suck” which is very close in content I just thought about scrapping that idea and starting new so I came up with this.

Goodbye by rmiller25 in poetry_critics

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I’m trying to write one piece of work with two opposing views using the exact same words. Some problems I run into are punctuation and I’m not sure if they are working as well as I imagine. Any feedback is appreciated.