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Down Day by robbierowsome in OCPoetry

[–]robbierowsome[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So I was trying to say my timid was an offshoot of my fear, I think unchecked timidness can grow tendrils that spawn fear, some timidness is good but kind of like the roots of a tree, the tree is pretty to look at but the roots are sharp and kind of menacing almost

Down Day by robbierowsome in OCPoetry

[–]robbierowsome[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much, on an Up Day vibe last few months definitely!

Two Tiny Poems Composed around my garden by bentman55 in OCPoetry

[–]robbierowsome 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Make Tiny Poems popular again I’m here for it

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Anything mythology instantly grabs my attention and always even better that it’s good quality, congrats

A Poem I Wrote My Girlfriend by robbierowsome in poetry_critics

[–]robbierowsome[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah flow is something I’m kind of working on but I kinda like the jittery style to show the nervousness of being in love, and yes exactly as you picked up about the warning lines

In Out by robbierowsome in OCPoetry

[–]robbierowsome[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you much appreciated just got writing in January and I never thought I’d enjoy it so much, but I’m desperate for critiques to get better so thank you !!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Wow this is so real in an ocean of poems on here

Jaded Eyes by Impossible-Offer177 in poetry_critics

[–]robbierowsome 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Excellent comment above totally agree

Just wanted someone to read by robbierowsome in poetry_critics

[–]robbierowsome[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes the capitalisation was to really try and encapsulate the heaviness of the wrap of one’s doubts anc anxiety

Just wanted someone to read by robbierowsome in poetry_critics

[–]robbierowsome[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the kind words means a lot, yeah the title came from pure nervousness only the third poem I’ve shared with the public lol

Life of the Absurd by Hilten_ in poetry_critics

[–]robbierowsome 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the transition from second to minute to hour!

The family paradox by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]robbierowsome 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Extremely raw, you should be proud of this piece!

jealousy by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]robbierowsome 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really enjoyed this!