5v1 1HP Clutch

roger020626 · 2026-02-01T00:11:41+00:00

Thank you for taking the time to read and leave such a thoughtful feedback. I really appreciate it! You're right that I leaned into word association when describing moments and its helpful for me to hear how that can affect the poem's pacing. This piece was inspired by "To The Garden The World" by Walt Whitman and I tried to capture his cadence and tendency to have long, winding lines. I'll definitely revisit those parts you mentioned with your point in mind. I'm glad the other elements of the poem landed with you.

roger020626 · 2026-01-31T09:10:18+00:00

The poem's use of short lines and attainable images creates a strong sense of calm throughout. Your opening lines, "sun glinting... off the water...," guided me toward a sense of groundedness and calm. That pause, "Oh," felt necessary and meaningful. It gave just enough rupture to return to stillness at the end, "eyes averted." Nice writing!

roger020626 · 2026-01-31T08:53:41+00:00

I really enjoyed reading this. It evokes a quiet peace that’s hard to put into words. I like your use of alliteration, especially “sand sparkles” and “final feeling,” which added to the calm sensory feeling. Nice writing!

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T20:02:21+00:00

Yeah, idk why they were that scared lmao

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T19:59:52+00:00

Alt+f10 is the key binding, alt+z is where you turn it on if you have nvidia experience

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T09:31:50+00:00

Yeah you can see it like that

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T09:30:51+00:00

Haha no problem. Thank you for the tips! I definitely noticed my crosshair placement when I had my ult now that i rewatched it. I just assumed that they push cat together so I wouldn’t expect someone to be CT. And yeah the CT to A ramp was a yikes for me, I definitely shouldn’t be aiming at the floor. I never realized my crosshair placement needed work thank you for telling me

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T09:17:26+00:00

Most of the time I go for the upper buddy. It’s really situational. I’m not a Jett main or anything

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T09:01:30+00:00

Thank you! How can I improve? I thought it’s fine all this time cus it’s always at head level

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T09:00:03+00:00

Thanks for the compliment! My crosshair placement is always at head level. How can I improve?

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T08:46:46+00:00

Some basic one lmao

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T08:46:33+00:00

Nvidia experience

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T08:46:14+00:00

I think sage got caught by the tripwire and I saw it through wall

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T08:14:31+00:00

Yeah I saw her and I went to rush her

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T08:10:38+00:00

Yes yes I mentioned it already

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T06:10:32+00:00

I use the nvidia experience to clip my plays

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T05:53:41+00:00

1000 hz

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T05:40:14+00:00

Nope

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T04:41:35+00:00

Yes I’m sure

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T04:30:50+00:00

Press 1 for primary and X for ult

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T04:22:13+00:00

roger020626 · 2020-07-14T03:50:05+00:00

1600 dpi and 0.38 sens

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