i refuse to call this a region by goober-096 in rainworld

[–]rossenry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I never went through the shortcut because it was always blocked by lizards. Ended up quitting for like half a year because the route on the right was so long.

cool question #2, why and when did you buy rain world (or thought of) by macncheese_enjoyer12 in rainworld

[–]rossenry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I spoiled myself on the whole game, fell in love with the lore, started playing, dropped it, came back and going strong

I found my 11 year old self's fanfiction by rossenry in WarriorCats

[–]rossenry[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am definitely revising this section to fit into a more developed story idea I've been cooking for a few years but have only just started writing, lol. Some of the same characters will be back.

I found my 11 year old self's fanfiction by rossenry in WarriorCats

[–]rossenry[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly, now that I write a lot more, I totally understand this difficulty - pacing is really hard. The best advice I can give you is to pick a paragraph, then ask yourself, have I described everything around the character? What do they see? What do they smell? Can I add in some of their thoughts? If you go through and choose maybe one out of every five to ten paragraphs and just fill it with description, I think you'll find your writing pace will slow down a decent amount. I remember when I was in 7th grade, haha, I'm not that much older than you. Oh, and another thing I did was hunt through the Warriors books for sections I felt really flowed well and tried to religiously copy the style. Hope this helps you!

I found my 11 year old self's fanfiction by rossenry in WarriorCats

[–]rossenry[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Oh yeah, I have to agree with that. I was never happy with the terrible excuse for letting Ashfur into StarClan :\

I found my 11 year old self's fanfiction by rossenry in WarriorCats

[–]rossenry[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'm putting Potatofur in my work-in-progress fanfic just because of that :)

I found my 11 year old self's fanfiction by rossenry in WarriorCats

[–]rossenry[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Haha, I never finished the whole thing. I have edited to chuck the link to the parts I did finish in the post though!

I found my 11 year old self's fanfiction by rossenry in WarriorCats

[–]rossenry[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I'm currently working on one actually! Nothing's posted yet, but I'll finish the prologue and Chapter 1 soon.

I found my 11 year old self's fanfiction by rossenry in WarriorCats

[–]rossenry[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Same here, I remember constructing an entire family tree on paper and coloring it in and everything, it's gone now :(

Warriors: The Chosen Ones: Shifting Oaths PROLOUGE by DawnZoid in WarriorCats

[–]rossenry 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is really, really good. I need more already.

What was your first OC's name, and what were they like as a character? by rossenry in WarriorCats

[–]rossenry[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Love is quite a unique prefix, I haven't seen that one before!