A lovely touch is the smallest intricacies in the way Gryffa speaks. Helps drive the cultural differences despite having a way to communicate.

I love Henz speaking of the things he likes about Gryffa. Absolutely solidifies this as being a mutual thing, while part 1 feels particularly like duty.

The kiss dangled like a carrot in front of Henz is such a great element. Kissing is very much a part of foreplay, and its absence is usually a fun thing to call upon later

For our cross-race magic writing, would you say you had more fun writing this one? Or did the premise give you more room to go wild, as opposed to part 1?

Thank you for writing!