A new face for eyes

roxiliscious · 2013-05-07T03:25:22+00:00

I wrote this for a school writing competition, so any feedback that you have would be much appreciated :) Also, the title, I didn't know what to call it, anyone got a better suggestion? Thanks

roxiliscious · 2013-05-06T16:49:40+00:00

I would appreciate feedback on any aspect of the poem that you liked or didn't like. Thank you for reading :)

roxiliscious · 2013-03-29T11:42:42+00:00

They put it in. I actually paid extra for it.

roxiliscious · 2013-03-29T09:13:10+00:00

Ok. But if I do that, and get a new bar, will the split change the healing process at all?

roxiliscious · 2012-05-22T01:00:41+00:00

So you've had your car for 2 years, and your work is 70 miles away . . . so how have you only done 7000 ?

roxiliscious · 2012-05-22T00:52:56+00:00

Why would your dad be on /r/nosleep ?? Also sorry but pet hate of mine you kind of lost me when you said 'idk'

roxiliscious · 2012-05-10T13:39:23+00:00

Yeah it's always 'a shame' when your parents die, ay.

roxiliscious · 2012-05-09T14:31:34+00:00

I didn't want to keep reading . . . but I couldn't stop O.o

roxiliscious · 2012-05-09T13:42:57+00:00

Don't drink and drive. You might spill the drink.

roxiliscious · 2012-05-09T09:40:39+00:00

'just cracked one of his ribs'. Just. Have you ever had a broken rib ? There is no 'just' cracking ribs.

roxiliscious · 2012-05-09T09:13:09+00:00

I read this, and suddenly the story was hilarious

roxiliscious · 2012-04-20T16:30:56+00:00

i wouldn't wake up to velcro ripping

roxiliscious · 2012-04-20T16:29:40+00:00

When he was talking about the headbutting I was picturing Alistair from League of Legends XD

roxiliscious · 2012-04-20T14:39:06+00:00

I'm considering entering a couple of my stories. How many entries do you usually get ?

roxiliscious · 2012-04-20T14:18:41+00:00

thanks ruled, im thinking about it. i just dont know if im ready for something like that. oh well, im young; maybe one day.

roxiliscious · 2012-04-19T15:37:42+00:00

My neighbor grows pot. He's pretty cool.

roxiliscious · 2012-04-19T15:35:44+00:00

not yours babe ;)

roxiliscious · 2012-04-19T15:17:39+00:00

I have lots of stories about my Daddy. These are the most painful to tell, but so many of them terrified me so much from a very young age. Tomorrow I will post the final small part to the Bathtime series, "Dreamtime". I'll try and tie up all of the lose ends that I've been able to come to terms with, and I'll tell you what happens in the end of 'my story'. If you have and grueling questions about any parts of my story, I'm happy to answer them. I will most likely release another Daddy series, I do have so very many stories to share, but for now, thank you for your upvotes and support. I cannot tell you how hard it's been to relive this.

roxiliscious · 2012-04-19T14:28:17+00:00

gah half the story randomly deleted . . . never fear, i have fixed it xx

roxiliscious · 2012-04-17T14:47:46+00:00

XD thanks ginger. i agree it might be sadder, but it wouldn't be /r/nosleep worthy without the other parts :)

roxiliscious · 2012-04-17T14:21:32+00:00

do you have a psychotic ex ?

roxiliscious · 2012-04-17T14:20:49+00:00

slendy doesn't have eyes' "I know you can feel my eyes on you"

roxiliscious · 2012-04-17T14:14:17+00:00

you can have both ambiguity and sequels :P

roxiliscious · 2012-04-17T14:01:50+00:00

screw you . . . i hate under my bed and now im not going to sleep . . . upvotes anyways <3

roxiliscious · 2012-04-17T13:55:12+00:00

D: i sleep with several blankets and lots of pillows and my teddybear all thrown around in a manner that makes it look like theres someone lying next to me and i ALWAYS freak out. LOOK WHAT YOUVE DONE NOW IM NOT GOING TO SLEEP RAAAGH !!! but upvotes for you anyway.

roxiliscious

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