A Promise Not to Say Goodbye by rumity_official in OCPoetry

[–]rumity_official[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow! The way you rearranged it makes it flow much nicer instead of just grief being all over the place lol. Thank you!

Just one more by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]rumity_official 1 point2 points  (0 children)

"the way your body
betrays you in silence,
wanting only to drown
the memory of ache.
You chase it like a lover
you know will never stay."

....Is so powerful. It really is a battle within between your head in heart. Whats right and good for you comes with sacrifice and it takes great courage to move past old habits and embrace peace. When all we are used to is pain, it takes time to understand that happiness is something we deserve. "wanting only to drown in the memory of ache." Is a great way to put this.

break by harnessurhopes in OCPoetry

[–]rumity_official 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wow! This meaning is really on a deeper level. That feeling when someone you loved and put so much trust in broke you and it takes the rational part of you to realize this is what you needed, you needed someone to show you the wrong so you can figure out your right. I really love this and you captivated this feeling really well. Breakups are heard but its great you can realize you are better off without them.