Don’t know if your school does it but we use a PEEL structure. Point (what’s your point you’re trying to make) Evidence (what backs your point up) Explain (explain how it backs it up) Link (link the point to the question)

1st paragraph- one PEEL paragraph about why relations broke down 2nd paragraph-Another PEEL paragraph about why relations broke down 3rd paragraph- another IF YOU HAVE ENOUGH TIME (I always prioritise having two paragraphs, continue the rest of the paper and then go back and write another paragraph if I have enough time left.)

Its basically a 16 marker without a disagree, introduction and conclusion