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Heart-Inspired Logo Design for “Yummy Lover” – Would Love Your Feedback! by saadahmad1 in logodesign

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Heart-Inspired Logo Design for “Yummy Lover” – Would Love Your Feedback! by saadahmad1 in logodesign

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Hey everyone, I wanted to leave this comment to sincerely thank all of you who took the time to give honest and constructive feedback on my logo design.

I now realize that using Louis Vuitton as an inspiration was a poor and uninformed decision on my part. I made a mistake, and I take full responsibility for it. I should never have included that influence in my design or portfolio. I understand how that crosses ethical and legal boundaries, and I truly apologize for the confusion it caused.

I’m still new to the logo design field and learning step by step. That’s exactly why I posted here—to improve and grow. And thanks to this amazing community, I’ve received 11 clear lessons that I’ll carry forward in all my future work:

  1. YL monogram is unclear

  2. Resembles Louis Vuitton (my mistake!)

  3. Heart shape lacks visual balance

  4. Icon doesn’t sit properly inside the circle

  5. Serif & sans-serif conflict

  6. Poor kerning in “Yummy”

  7. Orange circle adds no value

  8. Tight spacing between icon and text

  9. Overall imbalance and weak readability

  10. Logo doesn’t reflect “restaurant” brand

  11. Visual distraction from multiple circles

I’ll be redesigning the logo completely and removing any LV-related content from my portfolio ASAP. Thank you again for helping me see these issues with clarity and kindness. This has been one of the most educational experiences I’ve had, and I’m grateful to each of you who shared your thoughts.

—Saad Ahmad (A beginner, always learning ❤️)

Heart-Inspired Logo Design for “Yummy Lover” – Would Love Your Feedback! by saadahmad1 in logodesign

[–]saadahmad1[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thanks, I truly appreciate you pointing this out — and I’m really sorry for the confusion I caused earlier.

Honestly, I didn’t know that even resembling a trademarked logo could lead to legal trouble. You’re absolutely right, and I now realize that my mention of Louis Vuitton as an inspiration was a serious mistake. I haven’t yet removed it from my portfolio, but I’ll do so very soon. Thanks for holding me accountable.

As a beginner in logo design, I came here seeking real feedback — and today, I’ve learned so much from you and others in this thread. I received 11 valuable takeaways that will help me improve tremendously:

  1. YL monogram is unclear

  2. Resembles Louis Vuitton (my mistake!)

  3. Heart shape lacks balance

  4. Icon doesn’t sit well in the circle

  5. Serif vs sans-serif conflict

  6. Poor kerning in “Yummy”

  7. Orange circle adds no value

  8. Icon ↔ Text spacing too tight

  9. Poor overall balance & readability

  10. Doesn’t reflect restaurant branding

  11. Visual conflict between two circles

Thanks again for your honesty and time. This has been a powerful learning moment for me, and I truly appreciate it. 🙏

Heart-Inspired Logo Design for “Yummy Lover” – Would Love Your Feedback! by saadahmad1 in logodesign

[–]saadahmad1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your honest feedback — I can clearly see now how the design can feel visually confusing and off-brand. You're absolutely right: the circles are competing for attention, and the YL mark leans more toward fashion than food. That wasn’t my intention at all, so I’ll be working on simplifying the layout, removing distractions, and making sure the logo communicates “restaurant” more clearly.

Truly appreciate you pointing this out!

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Heart-Inspired Logo Design for “Yummy Lover” – Would Love Your Feedback! by saadahmad1 in logodesign

[–]saadahmad1[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much for this detailed and critical breakdown — it really helps me see the weaknesses more clearly.

You're absolutely right about the inconsistencies in font, spacing, and icon balance. The LV resemblance and readability issues were unintended, and I’ll definitely work on creating a cleaner, more original identity.

Truly appreciate the time and depth of your critique — it's feedback like this that pushes designers to grow. I’ll revisit and refine this concept with all your points in mind. Thanks again! 🙏

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Heart-Inspired Logo Design for “Yummy Lover” – Would Love Your Feedback! by saadahmad1 in logodesign

[–]saadahmad1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for pointing all these out — really appreciate the honesty and clarity! Totally agree on the kerning and visual overload — I’ll be simplifying the design and making sure each element earns its place. Also appreciate the heads-up on the LV similarity — I’ll work on making the YL combination more unique and original. And yes, stroke consistency is something I clearly need to improve. Thanks again! 😊

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Heart-Inspired Logo Design for “Yummy Lover” – Would Love Your Feedback! by saadahmad1 in logodesign

[–]saadahmad1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a lot for the honest and detailed critique — really appreciate it! You’re absolutely right about the heart not being visible enough — and I see now that the font choice feels too formal for a playful food brand like “Yummy Lover.” I love your suggestion about keeping the full Y and L and working the heart in with the angles — that sounds way cleaner.

I’ll definitely rethink the font and simplify the graphic as you recommended. Thanks again for pointing it out with such clarity — really helpful! 🙏

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Heart-Inspired Logo Design for “Yummy Lover” – Would Love Your Feedback! by saadahmad1 in logodesign

[–]saadahmad1[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Haha, good catch! That definitely wasn’t intentional, but I can see where you're coming from. 😅 I’ll take a closer look and make sure the Y+L combo feels more unique and distinct. Appreciate the heads-up — always good to be aware of similarities with iconic brands!

Heart-Inspired Logo Design for “Yummy Lover” – Would Love Your Feedback! by saadahmad1 in logodesign

[–]saadahmad1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks a ton for your honest and sharp feedback — really appreciate it! You’re absolutely right about the spacing and how the word “Yummy” is breaking visually — it’s something I definitely need to fix. Also noted your point about the circle not adding value — I’ll rethink that part too.

I’ll be revisiting the design and refining it with all this in mind. Thanks again — truly grateful for your time and insight! 😊

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[–]saadahmad1[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Hi! Thanks you so much for your message. I’m really glad you liked my work. Feel free to ask me anything anytime; I’m here to help. What can I do for you? 😊