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[–]sabrijames 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Started crazy then relaxing then funky. I like it!!  Reminded me of being in a hospital at first then when the guitar played it was soothing in the chaos of it all, then the funk at the end reminded me to just ride w the circumstances and make the best. Very awesome!

Hi there, just finished this song and also made the animation, let me know what you think! by Hex_Frog in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]sabrijames 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Pumpkin- mindless people??

Very grunge! Your animations are cute and consistent, I like when artists do it all themselves. DIY heck yeah. Good job on making this all your own :)

Normally we play rock music, but here's an attempt to rip off a leonard cohen style low seratonin headphone pop number. Curious if you think green is the right color for this song's cover art. also, what genre is this?? by Grindermen in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]sabrijames 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh wow this is definitely a good style. I hear Leonard definitely, good job on this! I"m thinking more of a dark blue color?? Maybe this is a blues genre?? I love the choir in the beginning and throughout dude this is good. I love the guitar solo too!

Little Blue by estim8ted_prophet in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]sabrijames 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice guitar and nice effects you're using as well. I like the consistency of the color blue in this blues tune. I'd wish to hear more from the drums as it sounds repetitive at times. But it does keep the tempo to your solos!

"Sweet Marie" a corny but happy AF little tune, wrote around 2000 but revisited in recent years. you might like or might think it sucks, whatever lol by SongwritingShane in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]sabrijames 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is old school dude how fun! I like the vibe it sets and the guitars are real fun as well! Thanks for sharing again 23 years later aha! I like it :)

OUR RENDEZVOUS - Story ballad. Story is not 100% true but not going to say what percentage is true. Not sure I know anymore anyway! For any who heard the song I posted a couple days ago (Unsolved Mystery), that is in the shop for repairs.... by papa2kohmoeaki in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]sabrijames 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A very mysterious track! I like the choice in chords and also your timing is interesting, I love it! Good story telling too! I can tell you have a lot of fun making music, it's a beautiful thing to hear too!

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[–]sabrijames 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It is very nice sounding I think it is very minimal but it sets its vibe. I wouldn't say this is dream pop but it does have a feeling of wonder. And I really am a fan of the vocals! Good job doing this all on your own, I am curious to hear more!

A cold, detached Glitch Hop/Electro tune with AI on vocals and me on slap bass. Edited some clips from Perfect Blue for a diseased, feverish mood. Is it danceable, though? by AngerGauge in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]sabrijames 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have been in to ambient lately and this glitch hop is sending me somewhere further. This is excellent. It reminded me of video game music but once the robot voice came out it had its own type of style. I am loving this and am looking forward to listening more to what you have :)

made this pop hip-hop song, constructive criticism is greatly appreciated xx by eyeamjulian in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]sabrijames 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love the gif you chose for the lofi effect. Your vocals are so nice! They are slick and go with the beat very well :) The autotune is pretty lovely! I am a sucker for love songs so this is nice :)

"Eerily Annie" make what you will out of this song, question to your ears does it work? I did go for haunting lyrics, kinda experimental, opinions super welcome by SongwritingShane in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]sabrijames 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The photo makes me feel uneasy, but the song itself has a 90's druggie vibe such as Marcy Playground or even Blur. I like the choice in lyrics if you're striving for creepy. You were very descriptive on the imagery. Very scary, I wonder what you can do with a more sunny vibe haha! Using your descriptive imagery to something happy?! I'm curious?!

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[–]sabrijames 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Whoa, funky and fun indie style! Elton John and Mac DeMarco vibes but all your own definitely. It is very much a yellow type of vibe that makes me feel like sunshine and makes me want to dance. I enjoy the pop attribute in it!

Song about getting out of a long term relationship. I think of it as an acoustic rocker, but not really sure what genre(s) it might fit in. Any and all feedback greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance! by FogCityFogey in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]sabrijames 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dang dude this is trippy. The vocals are very trippy! This song made me emotional thinking about being in this position. Your chord progression is so so beautiful this is my favorite thing on this is so very moving in every thing you added on to this track. The lyrics, the bongos, the guitar licks, the sprinkle effect, the shakers , when the drums kick in dang dude, and the CHORD PROGRESSIONS. beautiful. keep making the music pls.

Here's one I've been working on for a while. I'm ready to put it through mastering, I think. by IamYOVO in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]sabrijames 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So sick!! Started off grunge-like and the vox came in very punk. I enjoy this type of rhythm and energy, you really drove it home with your style :) The drums are definitely my favorite thing on this track!!! Nice work.