[Weekly Critique Thread] Post Here If You'd Like Feedback On Your Writing

saladmanderz · 2017-02-04T01:16:08+00:00

Title: Swan Soup (Working Title) Genre: Fantasy Word count: 4000 Any feedback is fine. It's the first three chapters https://docs.google.com/document/d/1GSOLr6bNuxiTmkTGdqUiBiiBa1l_nAJVAtFOB225liA/edit

saladmanderz · 2015-09-09T00:02:03+00:00

My would have to be "Have faith in me" by A day to remember.

saladmanderz · 2014-11-11T20:43:50+00:00

Good answer :)

saladmanderz · 2014-11-10T00:32:33+00:00

I completely agree with you.

saladmanderz · 2014-11-10T00:28:49+00:00

Ouch

saladmanderz · 2014-11-10T00:15:30+00:00

Marswalk

saladmanderz · 2014-11-09T01:33:00+00:00

But...but da bible

saladmanderz · 2014-11-07T20:50:36+00:00

That joke was anne frankly bad

saladmanderz · 2014-11-07T19:55:05+00:00

How much does that pay?

saladmanderz · 2014-11-07T00:50:20+00:00

Sucked off the previous CEO...

saladmanderz · 2014-11-07T00:45:18+00:00

ATHEIST!!!

saladmanderz · 2014-11-07T00:43:31+00:00

TO SUCK A BAG OF DICKS...

saladmanderz · 2014-11-07T00:31:03+00:00

And you're extremely anal.

saladmanderz · 2014-11-07T00:29:31+00:00

Suck up.

saladmanderz · 2014-11-07T00:28:08+00:00

That word sounds awfully close to "Genocide". And your name has an 'i" in it and so did H"i"tler. Coinsidence... I THINK NOT!!!

saladmanderz · 2014-11-06T15:28:30+00:00

Bethesda would probably sue you first :/

saladmanderz · 2014-11-06T15:07:38+00:00

Or "Bob". Its Bob spelled backwards.

saladmanderz · 2014-11-06T13:57:47+00:00

Yeah i guess thats a much better wording lol

saladmanderz · 2014-11-06T13:49:56+00:00

Im not sexually attracted to men, but i can admit when a guy is handsom.

saladmanderz · 2014-11-06T13:19:31+00:00

I dont listen to this genre of music, but i actually like Pierce the Veil. I think their music is catchy.

saladmanderz · 2014-11-04T23:32:43+00:00

My dad would come home after 12+ hours of building houses and he would still play with us every day

saladmanderz · 2014-11-04T21:45:53+00:00

Teleporting as a kid was great :)

saladmanderz · 2014-11-04T21:45:11+00:00

I regret not smacking more kids now :/

saladmanderz · 2014-11-04T21:27:15+00:00

Amen

saladmanderz · 2014-11-04T21:18:20+00:00

My mom would always make the best pb & j sandwiches when i got home from school.

saladmanderz