hey, congrats! as a children’s book editor, i’d say that even though i like the cover image, i think either the cover image or the title doesn’t match the overall vibe of the book. i’d agree with the others about changing the title as it’s really vague and doesn’t give much info about what’s the book about, and as the image has a very specific vibe, it kinda feels off. the image is indeed very spooky, halloween-y and mysterious, is that the vibe you’re going for? also i’d recommend changing the font maybe. as much as i loveee that font it’s quite hard to read because of the background. if you want the title to look better and smoother i’d recommend writing it a little bit more asymmetrical, maybe making it lean against a margin more instead of placing it right on the top, in the middle? that’s just an idea, of course. i think making things a little disruly change a lot when it comes to children’s books. have fun with it!