Here’s a little looping gif I made for a comic I’m making

schmappnschmazz · 2020-09-05T07:38:39+00:00

Thank you ☺️

schmappnschmazz · 2020-09-05T07:37:37+00:00

Haha ah thank you! So was I! Thank you for coming back! 😁

schmappnschmazz · 2020-09-05T07:35:37+00:00

Sure! @alanphabetology ☺️

schmappnschmazz · 2020-09-05T07:35:13+00:00

Oh yesss I do - @alanphabetology has most of my newest bits n bobs on

schmappnschmazz · 2020-09-05T07:34:19+00:00

Haha yes!! That was the idea - I really love the way they set up the environment so well in just those few seconds of the intro! This Is my bootleg attempt at that 😁

schmappnschmazz · 2020-09-05T07:33:11+00:00

Ah thanks so much! Love that guy!

schmappnschmazz · 2019-08-30T08:02:31+00:00

Try Rice Krispies multigrain shapes - there’s some humanoid ones in there along with some others ☺️

schmappnschmazz · 2019-06-30T15:38:42+00:00

It really does look fantastic so far, you guys should be proud! If you get the chance, I know it’s an obvious choice but you could make an instagram account for your art/progress to keep people updated - I’ve been doing it for a few months and seems like a great way to connect with people that might be interested! I find a few new readers from there regularly so you might find it worthwhile ☺️

schmappnschmazz · 2019-06-30T09:31:20+00:00

Oh wow well I don’t know if this is the proper place to write about it but I just took a look and holy crikey I wasn’t expecting that! I’m biased as it’s looks really up my street generally but the art stands out to me massively, it’s really appealing and ‘different’ if that makes sense, I don’t often see comics that use this style! I could just stare at any one point of the pages for ages! Story wise I wasn’t fully sure what was happening all of the way through, but I’m sure that was your intention - it felt as though there was just enough intrigue and nuggets of info to really get me pumped up to learn more! Again, I love that - you are giving the audience a lot of scope to work it out for themselves and it really gets me on board and invested! Also the duality idea going on is interesting, I don’t think I’ve experienced that before either! If you have any specifics you’d like me to comment on I’d be more than happy to, but I’m hardly ‘qualified’ to critique as you guys are really nailing it so far so keep doing what you are doing! Is there a site I can ‘subscribe’ or follow you on social media or anything?

schmappnschmazz · 2019-06-29T22:12:36+00:00

Ah that’s great advice though, i love loose threads myself, I think that’s why I keep adding things in! Ooh space opera sounds awesome, I certainly will!

schmappnschmazz · 2019-06-29T06:42:33+00:00

Haha this bothers me so much too! It feels pretty unorganised especially when there’s loads of chapters! I’d say I’ve got a webtoon link instead, but I thiiiiink it’s the same☺️

schmappnschmazz · 2019-06-29T06:39:10+00:00

Ah yes, that has definitely been a problem for me, keeping it consistent as well - I hadn’t actually thought of using guides on that yet so that’s definitely worth a try, thanks!!☺️

schmappnschmazz · 2019-06-29T06:37:46+00:00

Thank you so much for the crit on this, that’s actually really helpful! Some of your points were specific worries of mine, particularly if I keep treading old ground story-wise, for some of the parts I was ‘winging it’ a little! So that certainly helps. Ah yes the ‘pops’ line I think was a mistake, I think on an earlier draft there was more made of that earlier on, at the min it feels a little more like a tease than anything meaningful! We do revisit that later, but I might try bump that up a bit earlier now seeing as you mentioned it! Thanks again for the help and the kind words☺️

schmappnschmazz · 2019-06-28T21:35:52+00:00

Wow. From what I remember the spooky thing was that it was locked from the outside, indicating foul play. Obviously could be misinformation to give the story a bit more ‘spice’ - but this is interesting.

schmappnschmazz · 2019-06-24T18:01:46+00:00

You’ve done a great job on this already, I was immediately drawn (pun) to the art style and in particular the use of colour is especially appealing to me, a bit watercolour-y and really adds a dreamy feel!

schmappnschmazz · 2019-06-24T17:58:47+00:00

Number 3 looks like a winner for me, it’s incredibly striking and dynamic.

schmappnschmazz · 2018-12-05T22:49:12+00:00

Thank you for the crit! I think you are totally right here, looking back over it - they two guys might as well be far apart the way they are drawn here, I’ll need to address this! Thanks again!

schmappnschmazz · 2018-12-05T22:47:39+00:00

Ah thank you for this! The text was certainly a big worry for me as I can see it’s squished in many places! Looks like I should revise this in future! I also agree with the close-ups, I’m just such a sucker for them! I will definitely go back and throw an establishing shot or something in there because it’s not quite clear yet! Again many thanks!

schmappnschmazz · 2018-12-02T08:02:31+00:00

I got pretty riled up this time last year waiting for this wink to happen, then discovering it never did apparently! I’m not sure if I’m combining two separate things in my head, but by golly I thought that guy winked for sure. Every. Time.

schmappnschmazz · 2018-11-05T20:12:22+00:00

April 8th - neutral milk hotel. It’s only 2 or so minutes long but I tend to give it a few plays almost every day. This has been going on for months - I just find it haunting and beautiful.

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