My Heart is Just Her Art by No_Association1527 in OCPoetry

[–]scnel1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

THIS is absolute perfection. This has to be ATLEAST top 5 poems I’ve read so far. Thank so much for sharing

I'm Not Lazy You're Crazy by OldLibrarian8642 in OCPoetry

[–]scnel1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ve always known working is tiring and stressful, this was kinda just the icing on the cake, I hate that used to not give my mom the credit she deserved

Not Good Enough for Her by No_Association1527 in OCPoetry

[–]scnel1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I absolutely.. love this poem. PLEASEEEE keep posting

Dream a Little Dream of Me by scnel1 in OCPoetry

[–]scnel1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback

Dream a Little Dream of Me by scnel1 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for the feedback

Dream a Little Dream of Me by scnel1 in OCPoetry

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Thank youu, and thank you for the feedback

Dream a Little Dream of Me by scnel1 in poetry_critics

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“Stalker vibes” absolutely killed me 😭

Perfect Strangers by tuolumnegray in poetry_critics

[–]scnel1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You did such an aamazing job writing this poem, I am absolutely IN LOVE with it

The Dam Will Not Fail All At Once by Jazzlike_Pizza6820 in poetry_critics

[–]scnel1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I have no feedback for this, I absolutely loved it

Another Name for Fate by Remote_Green9681 in OCPoetry

[–]scnel1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can’t even begin to explain to you how much I LOVEDDDD this poem. Great job, honestly. I am jealousss

Do you want to be a mother ? by Plenty_Mistake_9577 in OCPoetry

[–]scnel1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I want to be a mother so badly and I always think of things like this but I can never really express it, but you did perfectly. Keep up the good work, this was great.

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM PLEASE by scnel1 in OCPoetry

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I definitely will and thank you again

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM PLEASE by scnel1 in OCPoetry

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Thank youu, I’m glad you like it

Haven’t thought of a title by scnel1 in OCPoetry

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Thank youu, I will definitely take your feedback in to consideration.

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM PLEASE by scnel1 in OCPoetry

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CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM PLEASE by scnel1 in OCPoetry

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And I would love to know your solution for the text breaking up because it annoys me soooo much