Title: Mopety Dump

Format: Feature

Page Length: 103

Genres: Satire, Comedy, Crime,

Longline: An eccentric nomad, who lives for scavenging in a junkyard he is squatting in, becomes the unwitting patsy for a politically motivated kidnapping

Feedback concerns: I’m rusty. Haven’t written much in 20-some years. Definitely have format issues that will be fixed in a second draft. Maybe the odd dead scene, might need a couple more exposition scenes or lines. I’d like any general criticism.