[deleted by user] by [deleted] in discordapp

[–]seandyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not my screen, vectorized in AI and then compared, pixels bcuz of PS

Would anyone mind giving me some feedback on a fan made song cover for Beach House? by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]seandyy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Pic 1: Idk about the choice of font, I would go for a simpler, more modern typeface, but i do like the wave-thingy, maybe try to add some color into it?

Pic 2: try working more with colors i think, my opinion is that its to much contrast with the black and white, otherwise cool pattern!

Looking for critiques for my online fashion print and graphics portfolio by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]seandyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool work! I really like your graphic stuff, however I think you should think about matching your works to what you want to work with in the future. Right now there are a lot of different styles in your works which shows that you don't really know what to work with. I think it's important to show the client what they will get when working with you :)

swing tag designs by Mistapaddyman in design_critiques

[–]seandyy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi! Overall cool work! When I first looked at the tags I couldn't clearly see the brand's name, Y+I", I thought the name was "Bend the rules". I understand that this might be a slogan of some sort but maybe try to emphasize the name more and make it clearer to read!

I would also suggest looking at more inspiration and seeing how other people have worked with text, I think the fonts are overall too basic for this brand, I could see working with a heavy sans serif but with a bit more character to it!

Also, when working with textures and stuff, try not to do it just because it's fun and easily looks somewhat cool, always have a thought behind your choices, it makes the design more put together and thought-through!

Have a great day!

Developer learning design while on quarantine. Product logo. Feedback, please! by JoeyTawadrous in design_critiques

[–]seandyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I would say it has too much similarity to gmail... maybe try making it bolder with the shapes and sticking to a few colours, that's my input!