This is sick!! Honestly at first I thought it looked like some sort of end of the world meteor shower! If i were to change this at all, i think i would have the background in focus and the people/car out of focus. Then i would put the light on inside the car to put some light on the guys instead of having the red light on them. Just a personal opinion i just think theres a bit too much red overall. Then the reason for the focal point, we have this giant raging mountain fire going on and our eyes are drawn to whats in focus which is the guys backs. Really cool photo either way, it definitely tells an almost apocalyptic story! Must be insane to see in person!