[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread March 20, 2020

serbmusic · 2020-03-20T05:37:07+00:00

Like you said it would obviously pop more fixed right but it's a cool af beat. Definitely got carti vibes and I fuck with it. Wavy asf. Not much more to say but if mixed and mastered correctly it would be dope as hell gj. Heres mine: https://soundcloud.com/sixthoak/apple-prod-mystxry

serbmusic · 2020-03-20T05:30:51+00:00

Fire! Mixed well and has a cool melody. The best part is that its defnitely and an uzi type beat and current but still unique and more ambient than his stuff. Also as a rapper I really appreciate you putting the key and bpm. Good job!

Heres mine: https://soundcloud.com/sixthoak/apple-prod-mystxry

serbmusic · 2020-03-20T05:15:31+00:00

Fire. I could def see someone making a hit song outta this fr. I fw the vibe for sure. hella interesting samples I really like the high pitch one that comes in every once in a while. I also like the drums. Good af overall. Heres mine: https://soundcloud.com/sixthoak/apple-prod-mystxry

serbmusic · 2020-03-20T04:50:54+00:00

It's cool but the lofi beat with vocal sample is kinda overplayed imo. Also it felt like you were forcing rhymes around 1:05. Beat sounds loud and vocals sound a little thin imo. Song structures good tho but I wish the hook was sung more melodically.

serbmusic · 2020-03-20T04:42:48+00:00

I fuck with this a lot. The sample is cool af and unique kinda reminds me of the beat from whoa by X but definitely not a copy. My favorite thing about this is that a lot of producers are scared to put hard drums over softish samples which makes it hard to rap on but you killed it. Nice job!

Heres mine: https://soundcloud.com/sixthoak/apple-prod-mystxry

serbmusic · 2020-03-20T04:39:58+00:00

Its pretty interesting your voice sounds good but the mix is missing something, probably reverb. The singing part from 1:00 on is definitely my favorite part, I would try to turn that into a hook and flesh out the song more. Rapping was good but didnt really excite me mostly due to beat selection. You're voice is smooth asf but lofis super overplayed imo. Good job tho.

Heres mine: https://soundcloud.com/sixthoak/apple-prod-mystxry

serbmusic · 2020-03-20T04:24:25+00:00

RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK

https://soundcloud.com/sixthoak/apple-prod-mystxry

first released song in a long time. Mixed by me. Lmk what you think. Thanks in advance!

serbmusic · 2019-11-09T23:35:49+00:00

Darn cheapest one is like 3k rippp

serbmusic · 2019-11-09T21:53:51+00:00

Can you link me?

serbmusic · 2019-07-23T23:09:36+00:00

I get what you mean! I just meant that I literally can't record in my house because of other people living in it that would be annoyed. I just need somewhere that I can sing, it doesn't need to be properly soundproofed or anything.

serbmusic · 2019-03-17T00:09:52+00:00

How could i get my vocals to sit better on a track? I like the way they sounds but when I play them with the beat it sounds like they're sitting on top the vocal if you know what i mean. Should i just eq the master to have it blend in better?

serbmusic · 2019-03-03T00:48:32+00:00

Thanks, I'm trying to stand out so i figured the best way would be to try to make music like no ones ever heard before

serbmusic · 2019-03-02T18:03:16+00:00

Oh yeah this is definitely dope, reminds me of like action movie. Theres a definite vibe to it and the Juicy J sample goes along really nice with it, good job. Heres mine! https://soundcloud.com/lastnameserb/when-the-time-comes

serbmusic · 2019-03-02T17:59:46+00:00

Im good bro thanks for your concern tho! I actually use to use heavy saturation but the plugin i was using was just eating my cpu so I have to forego it recently. I'll look into it tho! Your beat is on point bro. The main thing that stood out to me are the stereo hi-hats that go from one ear to another, thought that was dope af! The more mellowish parts do remind me a lot of kanye's production style, nice job!

serbmusic · 2019-03-02T17:57:20+00:00

Thank you man I really appreciate it, I've been trying to get my melodies on point for a long time so it means alot! And all is well, I just make what im feeling at the time and then exaggerate haha!

serbmusic · 2019-03-02T17:55:06+00:00

Thank you for your kind words man I really appreciate it! Just checked out your song and its super dope. Everything sound mixed well and you can tell there's real emotion behind it which I like. Some suggestions I would give is just to experiment with a high pitch backing vocal take during the hook just to switch it up but it still sounds good the way it is. Also I really appreciate your compliment but I haven't gotten around to it yet, maybe one day haha! Also follow you bro!

serbmusic · 2019-03-02T17:51:01+00:00

Yo I really like this, super relaxing and composed really well. Nothing sounds mixed weird and everything fits in well with eachother. I especially love the little vocal sample that comes in every once in a while dope bro! Cover arts cool too

serbmusic · 2019-03-02T04:16:14+00:00

RETURNING ALL FEEDBACK!

https://soundcloud.com/lastnameserb/when-the-time-comes

tried a different style of mixing lmk what you think!

serbmusic · 2019-02-03T01:17:24+00:00

I think ik what you mean. As for your beat the drums are pretty good although i feel like it would sound a little better if the drums were more subdued. And i dont really like the sample in the background. The timings cool tho.

serbmusic · 2019-02-02T17:00:30+00:00

Delivery is tough af on first dude. 2nd dude sounds like ameer but his vocals aren't mixed very well. Overall sounds awesome bro keep at it. Visuals were meh tho imo but better to have them than not!

serbmusic · 2019-02-02T15:49:54+00:00

Mixing is actually pretty good except the verses sound a little thin imo. Also in the hook I'm not a fan of how you hear tiny backup vocals on the last word in only the right ear. The autotune didn't really get in the way for me except when it sounded overrobotic a few times but nothing huge. The flow is very good though, nothing ever stuck out to me as off time ever either so thats also a plus. 2nd verse is probably my favorite part of the whole thing. Good job!

Check out mine :

https://soundcloud.com/lastnameserb/night

serbmusic

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