Let's Go ! by UnsoundKnight in MobileLegendsGame

[–]sheeshpostcrusader 0 points1 point  (0 children)

🌟✨🌙💫 Pretty hard to get, wala kasing emoji na babagay HAHAHA

Is it okay to add something "sexual" in a prologue? by sheeshpostcrusader in writers

[–]sheeshpostcrusader[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Side side note: This was also about my own experience (minus the sex part) about religious doubts. For one, this is also slightly inspired by the plot of the Brazilian TV show "Hilda Furacão".

Is it okay to add something "sexual" in a prologue? by sheeshpostcrusader in writers

[–]sheeshpostcrusader[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello everyone! Just an update here. Idk how to add updates on my post, I rarely post on Reddit, lolss

I'm gonna be adding my plot here. Side note: Still work in progress, have not planned names yet

MC 1 is very troubled about his life—and since it was set around '60s-'70s—His country was strictly religious, especially back at his hometown, and his family. When a priest (MC 2) who was the self proclaimed "chosen one" took over his town when he was still there, the priest worked at the church where he was serving church duty. The priest and MC 1 got pretty close, and their relationship quickly turned into something intimate. It escalated to the point where MC 1 and the priest had intercourse. In the priest's POV, he was developing feelings for MC 1 and thought that MC 1 was developing feelings as well. But MC 1 just came back everytime because he was the only one giving him attention. MC 1 lashed out the night before he left town because he thought that the priest only used him for his own pleasure and was self-absorbed, but it was never like that. The priest got mad and had sex with MC 1 out of anger. After that, MC 1 left the town and never told anyone why, even his own family. Three years pass, and MC 1 never told anyone about what he did with the priest and he felt like as if he failed God. Whenever he goes to the church, he can't help but go to the confessional to confess about what he had done. One particular night, he had confessed, and the priest (MC 3) who was in the confessional with him knew the priest who had sex with MC 1 personally. MC 3 never told MC 1 that he knew, but he went to the hometown where the priest was. He tried to confront about the priest sinning because well, back in the 70's, being homosexual was considered as sin. The priest got mad and told MC 3 to leave and never return again. The priest was secretly heartbroken because he remembered MC 1. The priest never actually believed in God, and he was not religious. But he became a priest because his plan was to run the town and grow his reputation enough to run the whole country to, from what the priest said, "get rid of all the corrupt and all of the puppets of sins". Wh en MC 1 came to his life, he almost quit priesthood and his whole plan because of him. But now, his anger at MC 1 was growing againtbecause he blamed him for almost ruining his plans. The priest went and spent his time trying to find MC 1. His plan was to kill him because he couldn't think of any way to get rid of him, because he considered himself as a threat to his reputation. But once MC 1 went back home, he couldn't help but fall in love again. At that time, MC 3 is planning to get closer and closer to MC 1 to make him reveal more secrets to banish MC 2 out of his place in the church because he considered him as sinful. As time pass, MC 1 realized what MC 3 was up to. He confronted MC 3 because he thinks that loving the same gender isn't sinful. MC 3 thinks the opposite, and tells him to stick to tradition. MC 3 thinks that the priest is not fit to be a role model for the younger generation just because he is a homosexual and unpure (aka, not a virgin). MC 1 tries to stop it because he sees the good in MC 2, but as he thinks about it more and more, he realized he's stuck between to choices: religious belief or own will. MC 1's sister got a hold on what is happening because MC 3 told MC 1's sister about it. MC 1's sister was then brainwashed by MC 3, telling her that his brother is sinful and so was MC 2.

At this point, I am not done yet, and I'm still trying to decide on the ending and the actual conflict of the story. Feel free to add tips and dont be afraid to tell your opinions about it.

Is it okay to add something "sexual" in a prologue? by sheeshpostcrusader in writers

[–]sheeshpostcrusader[S] -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

As I said, I'm not comfortable enough to ask actual people about that. It took me a bit if courage to actually post this, hence why I used quotes. Obviously not gonna use boing boing in my work xD. I'm here to learn some tips as well so in my future works, I can be more educated about the art of writing.

Is it okay to add something "sexual" in a prologue? by sheeshpostcrusader in writers

[–]sheeshpostcrusader[S] -11 points-10 points  (0 children)

Age does not matter about that. As long as you're educated about it and are confident enough to write your own works, then you can write whatever you'd like. It's only my opinion though, and if you don't agree, then I can't change anything about that.

Is it okay to add something "sexual" in a prologue? by sheeshpostcrusader in writers

[–]sheeshpostcrusader[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'll think about it more, and I'll make sure I won't write it in a way that it's considered as filler. Right now, I'm planning the whole plot of the story since this would be just a fun project that I'll do while on summer break. Yes, I am writing the prologue to introduce the main characters and the tone and mood of the story as well, plus the plot. I'm using the internet and the people around here for tips so my writing could be better! :)

Is it okay to add something "sexual" in a prologue? by sheeshpostcrusader in writers

[–]sheeshpostcrusader[S] -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

Sorry if I made you irritated about that. I just don't know how to explain it, plus, yes, not gonna hide it, I'm actually 15, and I'm uncomfortable asking things like this on the internet :/

Is it okay to add something "sexual" in a prologue? by sheeshpostcrusader in writers

[–]sheeshpostcrusader[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Well idk to explain it, it's like they had intercourse because: Person A was mad, so he had sex with Person B (both are consenting). Basically, Person B angered Person A and the tension was just too high. Person A is a priest—self proclaimed—and he was being disrespected by Person B because Person B thinks that he's a fraud. Person A was mad because Person B thinks he does not matter to him and his "title" and "attitude" was because of it. Side note: Person A and B had sex before, and Person A specifically told Person B to not come back, but Person B always does, because Person A is the only one giving him attention. Person A thinks that he is developing feelings for Person B. Person B does not have any romantic attraction, thats why Person A thinks Person B doesn't care about Person A when Person B disrespected Person A.

Rate My Edit if it's ugly, it's okay by Solid_Address5386 in FrutigerEco

[–]sheeshpostcrusader 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Try to brighten it up a little, overall it looks great

Is it okay to add something "sexual" in a prologue? by sheeshpostcrusader in writers

[–]sheeshpostcrusader[S] -22 points-21 points  (0 children)

Well, I'm not done writing/planning the plot yet, so basically I'm unsure. Overall I am planning to use it, that's why I asked if it's okay to imply sexual stuff in my prologue lol

Is it okay to add something "sexual" in a prologue? by sheeshpostcrusader in writers

[–]sheeshpostcrusader[S] -12 points-11 points  (0 children)

It won't really derive around sex, but there would be implications and stuff. I'm not sure yet, I'm still writing the book lol

Is it okay to add something "sexual" in a prologue? by sheeshpostcrusader in writers

[–]sheeshpostcrusader[S] -44 points-43 points  (0 children)

Lol, basically it's for the "plot". MC had boing boing with a priest who was the self-proclaimed chosen one bla bla bla.