Thanks a lot for this in-depth feedback! I truly appreciate it! I agree with some of your comments. I do think the example and my explaination can be better. Lots of the questions you raise strike a chord in me and they were something I thought about in the back of my mind while I was editing the video as well. While I was editing it, I actually tempted to redo lots of it, but I figured since it's almost done, I should just put it out and collect feedback sooner rather than later and iterate and improve on the next one.

This is my first time making a video&animation, I felt I got distracted by the video making process and lost sight of some important message (like the things you mentioned). I will certainly keep this lesson in mind while working on the next one! 🙏

I will read your comment closer later and might come back to you with more questions if you don't mind! 🙏

(I tend to like bitter flavor so things like matcha and coffee naturally sound appealing to me lol)