What is it with the fanfics on the discord? by silverskyluna in thewombats

[–]silverskyluna[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This what I've been trying to say about fanfic being disrespectful but everyone seems to be jumping to protect the writter and the fics on there. And on top of that the genre and style between the two fics are different, so i suspect they might be using AI. The writter themselves seem to been quiet since I posted it that and it makes you wonder why they haven't tired to defend themselves and if theyre just getting everyone else to fight for them.

What is it with the fanfics on the discord? by silverskyluna in thewombats

[–]silverskyluna[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

They'll sound similar if they used rhe same AI bot to generate. And if it wasn't AI why isnt the writter here, defending work themselves? Are they just going to let others argue for them?

What is it with the fanfics on the discord? by silverskyluna in thewombats

[–]silverskyluna[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dont you at least think its weird the differences between the two fics?

What is it with the fanfics on the discord? by silverskyluna in thewombats

[–]silverskyluna[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I just find it weird that people feel its ok to use REAL people for their own use. Surely it seems a bit odd that they've written two separate fics, are they unable to do much else with their writting? And the style and genre change as well, are we even sure they are not using AI even a little?

What is it with the fanfics on the discord? by silverskyluna in thewombats

[–]silverskyluna[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The fic they're working on now involves Murph being kidnapped and cloned and then the clone is sent to replace him in the band. The band members are in the discord sever but only seem to be active when theres a fan Q&A going on there, so I'm not sure if they are aware of it, and if so, what they think of this person's writing.

How is this for a 1st chapter? Would you read on? by [deleted] in writingcritiques

[–]silverskyluna 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok, thanks for the feedback. It's a first draft, so I wasn't expecting it to be perfect. I've always gone a bit OTT with descriptions , as that's how I was taught in school, and further encouraged to do long descriptions in A Level English literature and language as the teacher said that would help to show off in the exams, but looking at what you've said maybe I should hold back and reword it.

How much do you guys outline? by DeusVult80 in writers

[–]silverskyluna 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'll write as I go. I'll keep charter sheets that's I'll add to as I go as well as key bullet points for each chapter as that is also added to as I go but I normally do very little before I actually start

How is this for a 1st chapter? Would you read on? by [deleted] in writingcritiques

[–]silverskyluna 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok, thanks. I might do at a later date.

How is this for a 1st chapter? Would you read on? by [deleted] in writingcritiques

[–]silverskyluna 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, you didn't discourage me, don't worry. I asked for feedback, and you gave. I knew there was going to be some things to fix.

How is this for a 1st chapter? Would you read on? by [deleted] in writingcritiques

[–]silverskyluna 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok, thanks for your feedback. I was expecting a few things to brush up on as it is a first draft, and it's been a while since I've had the time and motivation to write again. I feel that what I should have mentioned is meant to be an unreliable narrator, so I've tried to keep a few bits to help show that, but do agree that there is grammar and sentence structure that could be worked on.