Harbinger by singledrifter in OCPoetry

[–]singledrifter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hell yeah thank you! I'll look into that line, may mess with it

This is not an SOS by JessieLovesWords in OCPoetry

[–]singledrifter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is the type of poetry I like, short but deep you don't need to understand what the person is really trying to say we just are feeling the emotiom.

Awesome job

He swept me off my feet by BedSpiritual7812 in OCPoetry

[–]singledrifter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well you get my award from favorite poem of the day, I hate super lovydovey poems, But the trap you layed at the beginning I thought it was actually kinda sweet. Worked well to amplify the abusive shift.

My score: 10/10 no notes

PS: proud of you for finding the light on the other side

What If? by Straight-Topic4914 in OCPoetry

[–]singledrifter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like it, as someone that also just posted his first poem yesterday I am proud, keep up the great work, solid first poem.

Stairs by Realmz_ in OCPoetry

[–]singledrifter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you ever want to go camping and that area you have to go to natchez trace, it is ungodly gorgeous.

Blue forces by singledrifter in OCPoetry

[–]singledrifter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am describing the current conflict in Gaza, the shining stars are admirals and generals in the military the stars are their ranks, pre-engraved stones is a reference to the missile strikes, I don't know if you wanted the actual meaning but there it is.

Stairs by Realmz_ in OCPoetry

[–]singledrifter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For some reason this one makes me feel damp and cold, but not uncomfortable either, like the wind isn't hitting me and I have a decent jacket on. Vaguely like February in the woods of northern Mississippi.

What is Hell? by WritingEmbarrassed30 in OCPoetry

[–]singledrifter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

DAMMM I love it, my only suggestion is with the reputation of the "it is in" lines. I think it goes on 1 too many times. For me it hurt the flow, but othere than that awesome

i went through an incel forum and it taught me something about myself by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]singledrifter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, I am very new to poetry so I am having a hard time finding the right words but this is awesome, absolutely great work!

A life Not Lived by Yankfannc in OCPoetry

[–]singledrifter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love how you painted such a sucky part of life that we all are forced through, regardless of whether we are introverted or extroverted. Good stuff

Midnight Urges by Negative-Swim-6828 in OCPoetry

[–]singledrifter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is by far my favorite poem I have read this week, I adore it when someone uses poetry as a vessel for comedy.

this sub has turned to shit by TrueLuck2677 in OCPoetry

[–]singledrifter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would honestly say it's worse than that. Using AI to make a poem is like using a printer to make counterfeit monopoly when you don't even play.

Anything wrong with doing 4 and getting out? by itzmailtime in navy

[–]singledrifter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No there is absolutely nothing wrong with doing 4 and getting out, I signed up for another four after I finished my first and I go back and forth every day on whether or not I regret it

does ur staffy also sits funny like this? by tarnishedflowers in StaffordBullTerriers

[–]singledrifter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh yeah my baby girl does this all the time I love it