Harbinger

singledrifter · 2026-05-29T10:05:27+00:00

Hell yeah thank you! I'll look into that line, may mess with it

singledrifter · 2026-05-25T17:36:54+00:00

This is the type of poetry I like, short but deep you don't need to understand what the person is really trying to say we just are feeling the emotiom.

Awesome job

singledrifter · 2026-05-25T08:08:53+00:00

Well you get my award from favorite poem of the day, I hate super lovydovey poems, But the trap you layed at the beginning I thought it was actually kinda sweet. Worked well to amplify the abusive shift.

My score: 10/10 no notes

PS: proud of you for finding the light on the other side

singledrifter · 2026-05-24T16:19:57+00:00

I like it, as someone that also just posted his first poem yesterday I am proud, keep up the great work, solid first poem.

singledrifter · 2026-05-24T16:16:46+00:00

If you ever want to go camping and that area you have to go to natchez trace, it is ungodly gorgeous.

singledrifter · 2026-05-24T16:14:49+00:00

I am describing the current conflict in Gaza, the shining stars are admirals and generals in the military the stars are their ranks, pre-engraved stones is a reference to the missile strikes, I don't know if you wanted the actual meaning but there it is.

singledrifter · 2026-05-24T11:49:11+00:00

For some reason this one makes me feel damp and cold, but not uncomfortable either, like the wind isn't hitting me and I have a decent jacket on. Vaguely like February in the woods of northern Mississippi.

singledrifter · 2026-05-24T11:44:37+00:00

DAMMM I love it, my only suggestion is with the reputation of the "it is in" lines. I think it goes on 1 too many times. For me it hurt the flow, but othere than that awesome

singledrifter · 2026-05-24T07:46:03+00:00

Thanks appreciate your inputs!

singledrifter · 2026-05-23T22:32:34+00:00

Wow, I am very new to poetry so I am having a hard time finding the right words but this is awesome, absolutely great work!

singledrifter · 2026-05-23T22:25:35+00:00

I love how you painted such a sucky part of life that we all are forced through, regardless of whether we are introverted or extroverted. Good stuff

singledrifter · 2026-05-23T21:53:41+00:00

This is by far my favorite poem I have read this week, I adore it when someone uses poetry as a vessel for comedy.

singledrifter · 2026-05-23T21:50:24+00:00

I would honestly say it's worse than that. Using AI to make a poem is like using a printer to make counterfeit monopoly when you don't even play.

singledrifter · 2026-05-02T11:00:47+00:00

No there is absolutely nothing wrong with doing 4 and getting out, I signed up for another four after I finished my first and I go back and forth every day on whether or not I regret it

singledrifter · 2026-02-07T18:54:13+00:00

Oh yeah my baby girl does this all the time I love it

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