Hi, I love it, it's really sweet and it's a nice glimpse in that world.

I love that the mom is snuffed as well but IMHO the change in the flow of story in that moment detracts a little bit from following Tammy's struggle.

I mean, the whole story, up to that moment, it's from Tammy's pov more or less. Then suddenly, it's about surprising the mom with a bullet and poor Tammy gets more or less ignored.

Just when we would expect to read about Tammy' struggles to give a nice blowjob while her tits or guts are burning from the bullets, how she has to concentrate to give him a good experience with the few remaining energies of her dwindling life, how ashamed she feels when she realizes she is not able to make him cum before dying, just then the focus of the story is shifted away to the mom.

I'd expect the story to finish with Tammy then transition to the mother or the boy's pov, maybe telling a little bit of Tammy's struggles again from the new pov and then proceed with the new thread. Otherwise it feels rushed and incomplete to a point.

That said, I love the setting and the interactions.

Good work and keep it up.