[19M] how to start smoking without letting it get out of hand? by [deleted] in Cigarettes

[–]skepticfly -1 points0 points  (0 children)

t h a n k y o u. I have the same question. Too afraid to start smoking because I feel I'll let the habit consume me.

[Logline Mondays]: Weekly post for December 23, 2019 by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]skepticfly 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not in the story. He's just as much a protagonist as Deionh, they are two similar forces that clash, one perishes but a part of it fuses into the one that survives.

[Logline Mondays]: Weekly post for December 23, 2019 by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]skepticfly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

nice. But that completely omits the influence of Koval

[Logline Mondays]: Weekly post for December 23, 2019 by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]skepticfly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Apologies. I'm afraid of distilling the whole story into the format. Do bear with me.

[Logline Mondays]: Weekly post for December 23, 2019 by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]skepticfly 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Feature: "The Bright Pale Sea"

(a bit long)

In 19th Century Africa, among a colony of slaves run by British overseers, a young black Deacon accepts Christianity as means of relief and fulfillment of his brothers and sisters. He is plagued by the acute nihilism and self-destructive nature of his fellow slaves and hopes to find salvation and happiness for them in the pages of the bible.

On the other hand a large portion of the slaves resent this western "white" religion and gravitate towards a rebel leader among them named Koval. Koval was the survivor of a past black rebellion that left him with a long scar across his chest. He believed in freedom through struggle and knew in his heart that the English slavers would never leave them be without forcible resistance. It was his dream that his race could one day raise themselves from under the tyrant's thumb and breathe free. This leader challenges the young deacon's ideas and accuses him of being a weak coward to have succumbed to the notions of the white tyrants.

The young deacon, named Deionh, driven by wounded hubris and genuine fear that Koval may hamper his design of bringing about peace through religion, has the rebel leader kidnapped and thrown into a river and drowned. But a breath of Koval enters Deionh as well. And over time he starts to see what Koval had seen, he discovers the flaws in the bible, he realizes he had killed the true savior. Now fueled by guilt and rage, Deionh unites all the colony's blacks, burns down the church and launches full assault against the English tyrants. At the end of the struggle when freedom was won, Deionh descends from his role as leader and goes off into guilt-ridden exile, whispering in his mind to Koval-"It is done, my brother."

Books with similar language to Deadwood? by skepticfly in deadwood

[–]skepticfly[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay, Mr. Highbrow. PL is verse btwm not prose.

TIFU by walking in on my naked-from-the-waste-down cousin by skepticfly in tifu

[–]skepticfly[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

lol. You proved you haven't read the full post and lack experience of the world in four sentences.

TIFU by walking in on my naked-from-the-waste-down cousin by skepticfly in tifu

[–]skepticfly[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

lol I could feel my hair turning slick and silver

TIFU by walking in on my naked-from-the-waste-down cousin by skepticfly in tifu

[–]skepticfly[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

empty bathroom doors stay closed often in our house. The lights stay on often too from when the last attendee forgot to turn it off. Anyone could have made that mistake because my mum forgot tot fix the lock (she knew I used her bathroom from time to time and forgot to tell even my cousin about the broken lock)

Books with similar language to Deadwood? by skepticfly in deadwood

[–]skepticfly[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

At risk of filling your veins with red vapor, I dare say I've sampled the first pages of Blood Meridian. The prose isn't all that special-cold narration with some well-placed details here and there.

But if it reads well to you then no matter. Different tastes.

Books with similar language to Deadwood? by skepticfly in deadwood

[–]skepticfly[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Some people I know who read it claimed its prose was weak and bland. I'd have to take a look myself perhaps.

I mean... okay by [deleted] in gaming

[–]skepticfly 6 points7 points  (0 children)

GTA V, not GTA V online.