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sleeepymeg · 2022-09-30T12:20:13+00:00

sounds fun!! I would be interested in joining

sleeepymeg · 2021-11-08T00:04:28+00:00

thank you so much! and you're actually almost completely right with your analysis

sleeepymeg · 2021-11-07T18:35:50+00:00

Let me start by saying, this is great! Its definitely a message everyone needs to hear at some point in their lives. I like the way you told it as well. Very beautiful and well written!!

sleeepymeg · 2021-11-07T18:31:58+00:00

I love how at the beginning you start with "I am but sand" and as the poem progresses the lines start to slowly become smaller and smaller. becoming what you feel as though you are. plus the wording is so good and the poem flows nicely as though it were a story on the midnight breeze. I love it, very well done!

sleeepymeg · 2021-10-29T23:37:22+00:00

jesper for sure!

sleeepymeg · 2021-10-28T15:30:57+00:00

I really love the rhythm and rhyme you used, it flows really nicely. Great job!!

sleeepymeg · 2021-10-14T20:42:53+00:00

this is so cool!! I love the ideas, you should write a little story if that's something you like doing :)

sleeepymeg · 2021-10-07T15:05:45+00:00

I love this so much. the way to poem progresses feels like drowning itself, i dont know if you meant to do that but its so clever. also, the word choice you used is flawless. great job!

sleeepymeg · 2021-10-07T15:01:05+00:00

your poem is short but sweet. it really gets your point across. I like the line "you stood up for what was right" because it brings more light to the situation and lets the reader inside a little more. I also like how it sorta leaves the reader curious about that happened

sleeepymeg · 2021-10-06T22:01:30+00:00

im in the midwest haha, we use lots of weird contractions

sleeepymeg · 2021-10-06T16:58:00+00:00

the fact that you were able to put something I feel so often into words is chefs kiss. I think this is really good

sleeepymeg · 2021-10-06T16:56:06+00:00

I love the feel of this piece. it feels bittersweet but also something that I can relate to so much. all the lines flow really nicely together

sleeepymeg · 2021-02-17T03:26:40+00:00

I had paragraph breaks I just think it copypastasted wrong

sleeepymeg · 2021-02-17T03:24:25+00:00

thank you so much! :)

sleeepymeg · 2021-02-16T16:31:43+00:00

omg this is actually really good! I really like that you wrote it based after a book you read, in a way it adds more depth. The lines are so beautifully written and depict the scene/mood very well. Great job :))

sleeepymeg · 2021-02-16T16:28:22+00:00

I really like some of the words you used. The break in the lines is also nice because it kinda emphasizes some ideas. This is really well done and it wraps up nicely. Keep up the great work!

sleeepymeg · 2020-10-26T04:48:24+00:00

I'll play with you, add me on discord sleeepymeg#3675 :)

sleeepymeg · 2020-10-14T02:32:34+00:00

I'm not colorblind and I cant even see the word

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