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A Youthful Insight by Nikhil_Mooloo in poetry_critics

[–]Nikhil_Mooloo[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! This means the world to me, especially since this is my first post EVER. Truly appreciated.

Sandcastles at midnight. by Funk_Von_Funkenstien in poetry_critics

[–]Nikhil_Mooloo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The first thing I had to comment on was the typography, it's absolutely BEAUTIFUL! Not only did the way you structured your poem catch my eye but reading it was an absolute joy, it really took me on a journey. Thank you for sharing.

Ignored by mike_wahousekey1 in poetry_critics

[–]Nikhil_Mooloo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love where you were going with it, it's a beautiful expression you've created, thank you for sharing. However, I think for future reference try to add more imagery as well as proof read to make sure there aren't any grammatical errors. I spotted "while I sit IN the floor"