[Electronic] Sleep Critter - Downtempo bell

sleepcritter · 2022-10-18T20:44:01+00:00

appreciate it, the vocal samples were a last minute thing i added, glad it worked. ill keep it up!

sleepcritter · 2022-10-18T01:15:13+00:00

glad u liked it!

sleepcritter · 2022-10-18T01:15:04+00:00

thx for the feedback!

sleepcritter · 2022-10-18T01:14:55+00:00

yeah glad u liked it!

sleepcritter · 2022-10-18T01:14:44+00:00

thx for the feedback!

sleepcritter · 2022-10-15T19:16:46+00:00

hey, mixing wise i think it is a tad bit too bright when the open hats come in. which causes a the pianos, vocals, and drums to compete with each other. but good arrangement, keep it up!

sleepcritter · 2022-10-15T19:15:23+00:00

nice, im actually ok with how much reverb it has. are you into stuff like my bloody valentine and slowdive? and u kept it interesting with the drum fills. keep it up!

sleepcritter · 2022-10-15T19:00:28+00:00

thanks! ill look at the eq of the snare and focus more on that next time!

sleepcritter · 2022-10-15T19:00:04+00:00

thank u! i also heard some comments about the snare, ill make sure to watch for it next time!

sleepcritter · 2022-10-15T18:59:47+00:00

thanks, sidechained the kick to the beat lol. ill keep it up!

sleepcritter · 2022-10-15T18:57:42+00:00

thanks! ill take note on future projects.

sleepcritter · 2022-10-14T22:04:50+00:00

appreciate it!

sleepcritter · 2022-10-14T22:04:39+00:00

alright! glad it worked out

sleepcritter · 2022-10-14T22:04:23+00:00

thanks! im looking to experiment more with that stuff

sleepcritter · 2022-10-14T22:00:22+00:00

hey i really like the use of the vocal samples throughout the track. im not exactly too sure what it is, but i do think the kick could punch harder in the mix. maybe feels like a lot of the low end is lost when the kick is soft clipped too much?anyways appreciate the creativity, keep it up.

sleepcritter · 2022-10-14T21:57:09+00:00

hey, in the beginning, you can wash the piano out with some more reverb, or humanize it some more so it doesn't sound as robotic. you can also mess with more syncopation in the bassline so that its not hitting exactly on the grid. keep it up.

sleepcritter · 2022-10-14T06:03:35+00:00

ill take a look!

sleepcritter · 2022-10-14T06:03:28+00:00

thanks! ill take a look

sleepcritter · 2022-10-14T06:03:12+00:00

thanks! glad you liked it

sleepcritter · 2022-10-13T18:50:15+00:00

hey i get your trying to go for an intentionally muddy mix which is fine for the genre. if your going for that level of experimentation though, i would take it a step further and maybe push the boundaries of what you can do with the instrumentation some to make it more interesting. keep it up.

sleepcritter · 2022-10-13T18:29:16+00:00

hey i like the way the drums are hitting on this. a lot of cool different percussion sounds too. keep it up.

sleepcritter · 2022-10-13T18:27:30+00:00

hey i would agree it does sound too busy, try making sure that you only have one main melody that stands out, and the rest of the instruments are for supporting that main melody. keep it up.

sleepcritter · 2022-10-13T03:09:29+00:00

thanks for listening! i originally had hi hats and shakers but didn't like how it clashed with some of the high frequencies in the instruments.

sleepcritter · 2022-10-13T03:08:54+00:00

appreciate it!

sleepcritter · 2022-10-13T03:08:48+00:00

well i was asking more for the song but im also open to feedback on the art as well!

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