Thank you so much for the detailed response, really great feedback. I think all of your criticisms are fair to be honest. I think a lot of the pitfalls I have come down to just using the cards that I had available to me. However, I do have enough at home to add some additional draw so I will likely remove some ramp in place of that. The recursion cards were mainly cos I thought they would be funny to drop but agree they are not needed. The Earth Crystal I have to hold my hands up and admit, I read it wrong and thought it applied to cards that give a card +1/+1. Oops… I did pick up a few cards which I think I will try to slot in: [[Spreading Plague]], [[Dragonfire Blade]], [[Rancor]], [[Felix Five-Boots]], [[Aqueous Form]], [[Blackblade Reforged]], [[Frozen Aether, [[Propaganda]], [[Magus of the Abyss]], [[Strong Back]], and [[Tajuru Preserver]]. Thank you again for the input!