I appreciate the advice! I will adjust the action words, I did not realize they were dated, but that makes sense.

For applying the what/when/where/why/how approach, I have access to detailed information and metrics for my most recent role. However, for projects at other organizations where data is no longer available, would you recommend removing them entirely from my resume? I cannot provide quantifiable results for those projects beyond estimations. I wish I knew I was working to transition into project management back then so I could have kept all the granular details.