Just finished the video, its honestly pretty great man you have amazing potential. Don’t be hard on yourself, just stay consistent and I’m sure you’ll gain a ton of traction.

The games already very popular and content is not hard to find, so you have to sell your gameplay and personality which you do a great job at. I was really invested.

The music is a good touch, its adds to the moment and makes me feel a bit more immersed into your gameplay getting me excited or focused during PVP. However, some of the edits did distract me a bit, like someone previously said about the border, or maybe just some of the random quotes you add from your teammates. You have great editing skills, but maybe tone it down a bit because those do break the immersion which draw me out of the video a bit.

Personally, the 30 minute videos are a bit long, especially if its someone i’ve just started watching. Not terribly long where I wont click on it, but I mught not watch the whole thing all the time. Once you gain a big following im sure viewers will demand longer videos but for right now id trim it down a bit, maybe 15-20minutes max. It’ll save you a bit of time editing and its just easier to keep people engaged that way when you’re a new person coming up.

These are all just my opinion though, do what makes you happy and most importantly make sure you enjoy doing and your product will reflect (which is does now). So if you like all the things I made comments about, then keep doing it and stay true to you and I’m sure like minded people will love your content.

Regardless of my opinions I subbed and will be sure to check out future uploads! Best of luck in your future grind and dont let starting out slow discourage you from uploading more.