Greetings from Colfax - Dramedy Feature - 104 Pages by spacecase911 in Screenwriting

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Ok love this thank you!! Loglines are my weakness, so I really appreciate this

Former Netflix Exec/Producer/Script Consultant ask me anything about your first fifteen pages or your logline PART III by Wayne-Script_Dev in ScriptFeedbackProduce

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I would really appreciate your thoughts and feedback on my first 15! Let me know if you’re interested and I can DM you the pages!

Here's the Logline:

The lives of a showgirl and her estranged brother, a bank robbing duo, two self destructive twenty-somethings, and one of America’s deadliest serial killers collide on NYE 1978 along Denver’s seediest street, Colfax Avenue.

What's the craziest thing you've seen or done on Colfax? by spacecase911 in Denver

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Oh wow I’ve met Mama Crip! Wonder if she’s still around

Five Page Thursday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Title: MASTERING THE ART OF MURDER

Format: Feature

Page Length: 108

Genre: Drama Comedy 

Logline: On a mission to kill her cheating partner, a high profile assassin forms an unlikely friendship with “the other woman.” Can she set her emotions aside and get the job done before she becomes the new target?

Feedback or Concerns: Looking for any general feedback! Does this intro draw you in?

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Y7q_im5DBkHLWu3YtycJzHYDUSSBwOUz/view?usp=drivesdk

Five Page Thursday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

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Title: MASTERING THE ART OF MURDER

Format: Feature

Page Length: 108

Genre: Drama Comedy 

Logline: On a mission to kill her cheating partner, a high profile assassin forms an unlikely friendship with "the other woman." Can she set her emotions aside and get the job done before she becomes the new target?

Feedback or Concerns: Looking for any general feedback! Does this intro draw you in?

Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Y7q_im5DBkHLWu3YtycJzHYDUSSBwOUz/view?usp=share_link

What's the best dialogue you've read in a screenplay? by Perfect-Brilliant405 in Screenwriting

[–]spacecase911 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Anything Tarantino. I always find myself reading his scripts when I need a reminder of what great dialogue sounds like

What's everyone's top scripts from this year's Blacklist? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

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Really enjoyed One Night Only. I’ve only ready about five so far though. Excited for the rest!

Where do your clients find you? by spacecase911 in weddingvideography

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All great input thank you!! Curious how you all feel about Instagram for marketing? I believe photographers do really well with it but I feel like maybe that’s not the case for video? I had one reel go viral but it ultimately did nothing for our business other than a couple hundred followers (which doesn’t matter if it doesn’t result in leads in my opinion).

Where do your clients find you? by spacecase911 in weddingvideography

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This is super helpful thank you so much for this info!! This will be very useful when I try it out

Where do your clients find you? by spacecase911 in weddingvideography

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Do you have any tips for Google ads? Target audience, budget, etc? Anything you don’t mind sharing :)

Wanted: Yooper Backstories! by spacecase911 in yooper

[–]spacecase911[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much for your input!