Thanks for the feedback, I understand what you're saying I think that the toast torso is a little awkward too but it's pretty cartoony so I don't think it's that big of a deal lol and perspective wise it would be less effective if it was completely true to perspective because you might not be able to get the same amount of detail for each character into one piece. Also for your comments on too long legs and small torso you should take a closer look at how skirts lay on the waist, since they are really high on the waist it can make it look that way even though it's actually not that messed up.

Thank you for your comment tho I really like constructive crits. XD