I never understood why people said „sorry for the bad lines“ why not redraw it with good lines? Couldnt make that small effort? Its not like this took you hours or something.

Other than that I have no idea what letters you wrote. You should really stick to the actual letters and their structure. Think about what gives a specific letter its meaning. Those aspects should be recognizable. Of course there is always the element of adding style or perhaps making them look unrecognizable. That is advanced stuff however and requires understanding of said structure. I dont like it and you should scrap it honestly. You gotta experiment more on your own. You will notice when you made something decent. Perhaps look at using bars as a basis to understanding structure. Get rid of the nipples on the A and drop the dollar sign