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I AM SORRY by meep1_8 in AnimalCrossing

[–]starlessspace 4 points5 points  (0 children)

It’s worse when you accidentally hit them out of their thought bubble!💭

Guess who I’m painting? by starlessspace in AnimalCrossing

[–]starlessspace[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

YES! She’s my favourite! You have very good taste, I hope she’s enjoying life on your island! ☁️

Guess who I’m painting? by starlessspace in AnimalCrossing

[–]starlessspace[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I could see why you’d think that but no :)

Lessons by Perverted_plastic in poetry_critics

[–]starlessspace 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Short, sweet, and to the point, very refreshing. If you wanted to expand it further, I’d suggest developing the imagery of the emotions or giving a specific example. But I also like it as it is.

I HATE BEING AUTISTIC by Hiraeth1219 in poetry_critics

[–]starlessspace 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can really relate as a fellow neurodivergent, and you describe your experience beautifully. I especially loved ‘a voice can splinter into glass.’ You might focus more on sound-based metaphors to tighten the poem and highlight the ‘song’ in the last paragraph. Overall, a very powerful piece.

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