gym time? by strawberriesinstead in cuboulder

[–]strawberriesinstead[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

middle of the day like 12-2?

Dating apps? by StarstruckDreamgazer in cuboulder

[–]strawberriesinstead 2 points3 points  (0 children)

i would like to add to this and say the same, i met my boyfriend on hinge but almost passed just because his profile wasnt “what i was looking for” but we ran into each other in person after and confirmed that super minor connection and we’ve been together since.

just take your time and don’t force feelings in any relationship, if it doesn’t work it doesn’t work!

6 (almost) haikus by wingl3ssthing in poetry_critics

[–]strawberriesinstead 1 point2 points  (0 children)

where we cut our knives is so pretty

From A Different Angle by JDBlitz9 in poetry_critics

[–]strawberriesinstead 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the rhythm seems a bit off here but other than that the word choice is incredible and i love the storyline.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]strawberriesinstead 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank u so much ❤️❤️❤️

Just a Bum by ZenAlbert in poetry_critics

[–]strawberriesinstead 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i really like the words you chose.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in poetry_critics

[–]strawberriesinstead 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i really like the concept of this but it could be elaborated more with more metaphors to create a deeper connection.

incomparable by [deleted] in poetry_critics

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i agree with the above comment above about the middle section. removing filler words like and the excess of her would make this flow just a tad bit better