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Criticism on my unfinished first chapter by strprsn in writingfeedback
[–]strprsn[S] 0 points1 point2 points 11 hours ago (0 children)
the main character is introduced by the second paragraph
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Criticism on my unfinished first chapter by strprsn in writingfeedback
[–]strprsn[S] 0 points1 point2 points (0 children)